I'm Just an Ordinary Guy, but I'm Surrounded by Abnormal Beauties

My headache today allows me to rest for a day.

I actually think this yandere novel is great, there's no need to criticize it so harshly. This yandere novel has actually made me look forward to the next part of the story. This is the second time this has happened to me; the first time was with the novel next door, "Ling Fan." The writing is really good, and the male lead's style is exactly my type—unpretentious, not narcissistic, not delusional, just a truly ordinary guy, which is great. I like this type; it's rare. Also, yandere novels where the male lead has too high emotional intelligence aren't very good. The author has also planted many foreshadowing elements. Honestly, I'm very interested in the upcoming plot. Keep it up, author! If he doesn't read it, that's his problem. Just write your own story well...

First of all, I'm very dissatisfied with the way the previous commenter used profanity in the rant section. Whether it's bad or subpar, pointing it out would have been enough; there was no need to resort to insults and profanity in the rant section. I hope they can apologize for this before addressing the writing style. I haven't read any of Chi Hong's books in a while because I've been too busy with work. I used to follow slice-of-life stories, but I haven't read this one. However, after reading the first part, I can see that there are indeed significant problems. The excessive use of subjects, especially in the first person, makes it feel awkward and even uncomfortable. If they could switch between the first and third person slightly and remove some of the unnecessary ones, it would be much better. Compared to another book, "Slice of Life...", I...

This is the worst-written book I've ever read, and it's the first time I've written a book review in my anger. I endured it until the first chapter, but I just couldn't take it anymore. A single sentence uses "I" three times, or at least two times. Aside from this major obstacle to reading, many word choices make the writing choppy. I was so angry that I made several revisions to my review of the first chapter. (If you insist on criticizing me, please read my revisions.) Although my writing is terrible, at least it's readable. I urge the author to at least write something readable.

There's actually a legendary author who updates monthly? Author, don't you have a conscience?

I'll be updating this book a lot more next month to secure a contract. I'm busy with another book this month, but you can check it out if you're interested; it's a historical romance book I wrote myself.

I admit the author's subject matter is indeed novel and appealing, but frankly, the writing style isn't very good. For example, this passage: "Then she picked up her toothbrush, squeezed out the toothpaste, and started brushing her teeth. After brushing, she washed her face, and after washing up, she prepared breakfast..." This part is absurd. I've read several chapters, and this is the most problematic passage I've ever read. Unimportant details don't need to be described in such detail; it's like asking which foot goes in first when you go to the toilet. The writing style is also below average compared to many other novels I've read—too immature, and the adjectives are all two-word phrases like "a white hat..."

I'm here to recommend one of my novels. You can read it by clicking on my profile picture. Please, please add it to your favorites! (Sorry for any inconvenience.)

I've started a new book! Those interested can check it out tomorrow. It's also a yandere (obsessive/yandere) novel.

Is the author's girlfriend a yandere?