The Hero Is Reborn as a Lord and Sets Out on the Path of Revenge

Wow, that perseverance!

Powered by love, amazing!

Detailed question: Is the author aiming to construct a long or medium-length revenge epic or a farming-style novel? Your synopsis and title gave me a sense of the protagonist's vengeful passion, yet the story itself is quite gentle. The protagonist remembers the past, understands the present, and focuses on the future; he's like a sage, with somewhat detached emotions. The writing style is excellent and shows great care.

The vengeful rage, the darkness emanating from within, is diluted in the protagonist's portrayal, or rather, in your writing. This is the biggest problem I find most jarring. The psychological shift of gradually crushing the empire, the irresistible urge to express his preference for Tania among so many women upon seeing her reborn—the excitement and tension of collaborating with the princess—are all portrayed with a superficial, detached tone.

The story has a clear plot and a fairly complete spatial and temporal transformation, making it a satisfying read! However, the overall framework is still based on the ancient Chinese bureaucratic system, so when the cabinet (main city) members appear, they don't show any particularity. Tania's anxious and proactive approach feels a bit off, given her miscarriage and status as the protagonist's first romantic partner; the other three dark elf sisters are basically secondary.

The protagonist's combat strength is too low. He's supposed to have fought in battles, yet he can't even beat two thugs.

I just found this book. Could the author tell me about the male protagonist's personality? Is he cold and aloof, or is he cold on the outside but warm on the inside? Is he single or what?

The author writes well, the plot is smooth and interesting, and the descriptions of melee combat are quite professional and detailed. Unfortunately, the portrayal of melee warfare is haphazard and poorly executed. I only recently read the part where the Mo army ambushes the stone bridge during the battle against the rebels in the imperial city, and one scene made me burst out laughing. The author himself said the main reason the city defense forces were ineffective was due to command problems; their training was acceptable. So, how could they be so easily overwhelmed on a bridge in such ideal terrain, with long spears arrayed without considering left, right, or rear? Did the spears in that spear formation look like they were made of reeds? And what about heavy armor being cleaved in two by a sword? Was that heavy armor made of paper? And the two female leads...

I feel like I've struck gold! I'll put on my headphones and listen first.

Why is it that after more than 300,000 words, there are only a little over 100 reads?