The Dragon Princess's Demon Big Sister

This volume continues the protagonist's training, and it's a bit angsty.

First, the plot is quite good, and the author didn't add too much filler, making the whole story tight and enjoyable to read in one sitting. Second, regarding the writing style, some descriptions are a bit stiff, making the characters less vivid. It's suggested that the author accumulate more vocabulary describing expressions and inner thoughts. Finally, the author could use their own writing style to polish the story, which would make it much smoother. Lastly, I wish the author continued success in their writing.

I think the plot is pretty good, but I feel the author doesn't know how to pad the word count. Many descriptions are lacking, making it feel strange and illogical. Take your time, enrich and revise some of the language. For example, when the protagonist runs off to the demon realm, he runs away in front of everyone (isn't the protagonist supposed to be a useless character?). He runs away, and no one even chases him... Author, keep it up! Many parts need improvement. It's quite good, I look forward to it. (Just a few words of padding, 140 words already!)

Those with brains can't read this.

If I were to transmigrate to the Demon King's side and become a family counselor, I would thrive. This is why mutual understanding and tolerance are so important between husband and wife.

The writing style is rather indescribable; it feels like the outline was simply copied and pasted. A depressing story has been turned into a silly, comedic one.

Visiting the grave is another way to commemorate the first book I bought with this pineapple bun.

The author seems to have completely forgotten about the supporting character who provided the power.

I heard it's depressing, which is my favorite.

Personally, I feel the female lead is too weak. Even if she's a good girl, she should at least have some fighting ability. In the early stages, her identity is incredibly powerful, with multiple attributes, making her seem like she can't beat anyone. She could at least hold her own against the Demon King for a move or two. It's so frustrating to watch. The main problem is that she was a man in her past life. Just thinking about the two characters together makes it obvious. It would have been better to give her a commoner identity, high-level looks, and no overpowered buffs. She's capable but doesn't do anything. I'm speechless.