I Escaped the Sick Queen, but Somehow I'm Popular

The plot is a bit dragging, and the transition chapters are too long, which can easily cause readers to lose interest. Since the goal is to delay the female lead's appearance, the middle part of the story needs to have some interesting plot points ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧ (hint) to grab the reader's attention and keep them engaged, preventing boredom and motivating them to continue reading. Of course, I quite like the book's premise; the yandere and stunningly beautiful female leads both suit my taste. However, regarding the female lead's appearance, when she encounters important characters, her appearance and the characters' reactions upon seeing her could be emphasized. These are just my personal thoughts...

Author, you're still here! You have a collection of newly released books from the last few months.

Actually, the beginning was quite good and worth reading. However, the later viewpoints... Well, they're a bit strange. What does it mean that if the person involved is wrong, and you think you're right, then you should correct them...? (What makes you think you're right?!) This is my first time writing a book review, and this book is a real shame. If I had to change it, it would probably be the author's thought: "Why can't you make me happy?!" The sense of responsibility is rather weak... The characters in the book, including the protagonist, all exhibit a "No matter how big the problem is, I need to finish my own business first" attitude. The more I read, the stranger it became. Of course, this might just be a clash with my own beliefs.

The content of these chapters was truly disappointing for me personally. A Saint-level expert was outmaneuvered twice by someone who wasn't even at the first Saint level. I seriously question the validity of this claim. Don't tell me it's because Rose's skills are special; what happened to the saying that each level is a watershed moment? How could someone with such a huge gap escape? And twice at that! Also, the later encounter in the corridor was filled with an overwhelming sycophantic stench. Everything else was alright, but these chapters were really let down.

If anything happens to the Queen, I'll send you a knife.

Congratulations on getting featured! These days, getting featured is really difficult.

I hope it's not a harem; it would be great if the main character only loved the Queen.

When writing a book, please minimize unnecessary descriptions. Too many descriptions really ruin the reading experience. For example, Chapter 17 of Volume 6. The elf didn't care about other things, but she treasured the books here. This situation really brought tears to her eyes. Louise is in the air... Wouldn't all her previous efforts have been in vain?

Weaknesses: 1. Anticlimactic ending; 2. Forced intellectual drop; 3. Frustrating plot; 4. Failed character development. The first point is self-evident; the author gradually became less attentive in the later stages, resulting in a rushed ending. The second point is the forced lowering of the protagonist's intelligence for plot purposes. While the early and middle stages were generally good except for a few minor incidents, the protagonist's intelligence became inconsistent and unpredictable after the demon invasion, making it seem like the author deliberately lowered their intelligence to drive the plot forward. They were either slow to react or appeared both clever and foolish. The third point is particularly fatal; seemingly, the protagonist appears as a top-tier fighter...

Although it's a pure love story, it's really painful to watch the protagonist get schemed against by everyone later on.