Please Don't Be My Girlfriend

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I cried, not because of pornography, but because my new book is completely gone. This book will resume its daily double-update schedule.

I've been paying a few cents a day to subscribe for over half a year, but I can't keep going anymore.

I really liked this book, I don't understand why nobody reads it. The author is quite something, though, managing only about 600,000 words from 2019 to 2021. It's such a shame that such a good book has fizzled out. Sigh...

Headache

I got over ten more subscribers today than usual, let's celebrate! I'll be up late tonight!

Let's go! I'll be working like crazy on the live stream tonight!

One extra chapter for 50 monthly votes in January, one extra chapter for 5000 Fire Scrolls. 10,000 words per day in February. No nonsense, please give this novice writer a monthly vote. (I will keep my word, extra chapters will be added on the spot.)

Yes, it's a yandere (obsessive and possessive) novel. It features various types of yanderes. The early character relationships were decent. The yandere aspects were handled fairly well. However, some parts need improvement; their actions are often too hasty (like their excuses for the male lead). They tend to trust him too much. For example, when the protagonist is cultivating, even though this isn't primarily a cultivation-focused story, it's still a bit too much. While there are various types of yanderes, it feels like they all become the same later on. Also, some turning points aren't well-written. (Overall, this book has everything it should have, but some parts feel a bit rambling.) I hope the author can improve. This is my first time writing...