Even After I Transmigrate into Date A Live, I Still Want to Be a Couch Potato

This book has both obvious strengths and weaknesses. I won't go into the strengths; reading is about enjoyment, and simply put, happiness is the ultimate goal. As I've said before, a good article is one that brings joy to others without negatively impacting them. As for the weaknesses, I'll mention two. Firstly, it lacks detailed interweaving. I can't say much, but some of the plot details in the author's book are indeed somewhat lacking (though I'm perhaps the least qualified to criticize). The flow between paragraphs feels pieced together, giving a jarring and somewhat bitter feeling. That's how it felt to me, so I hope the author can improve the handling of details...

Pick up your pen and write a unique story. I'm a Date A Live fan, and I clicked on this page because of your name. To be honest, I never imagined you had such a vivid imagination, nor did I expect to gain so much from clicking on this page with a "let's give it a try" attitude. I'm very satisfied with your story; you have your own unique style, creating a completely different Date A Live world. Although it's not yet fully mature, it's getting better and better. I look forward to the rest of the story and anticipate the protagonist's adventures. Keep it up, you can do even better!

I'll always love Xiao Zui (serious face). What? You want to take Xiao Zui from me? Hehe, impossible! I'm sure all readers will feel the same way after reading this masterpiece: What makes the author write so well? The article is well-organized, the characters are meticulously portrayed, and the transitions between plot points are not abrupt at all, but rather flow smoothly and seamlessly. System, time travel, fanfiction. The author has perfectly blended these three elements together. I can say one thing: it's really good. I've read quite a few fanfictions, and as a new book, I think it has great potential. I believe that as long as the author perseveres...

It's true that everyone who removes plaster is a white-haired fetishist.

First, I'm sweeping the grave (crying and sobbing). Waaah, even you're gone. How come all the big shots who were with me are gone?

Pfft, I just found out today that the Fake Witch can actually change people's genders, tsk tsk. I haven't watched it yet, but I inexplicably feel sorry for Shido.

You old pigeon, if you have time to check my posts, hurry up and update them!

Go to class. Who told you to dig up grass on graves?

I'm going to dance Shin Takarajima on this grave.

Going home tomorrow