
I Arrived in the Date A Live World Without Knowing Anything
毫不知情的我来到了约战世界
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 301k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
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147Chapters
1.5MClicks
6.6kFavorites
9.3Score
1kLikes
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As for ratings, I usually give a book ten stars unless it's absolutely awful. So, let me first point out the shortcomings. My words might be a bit harsh, and I hope the author won't mind. First, the characters' personalities are drastically different. For example, Shido. Shido isn't supposed to be a goofy character at all. This forced change feels incredibly jarring and is one of the reasons I wouldn't read it. Of course, it's perfectly normal for authors to change characters from the original work; I do it often too. However, this clearly lacks logic. For example, in one chapter, why would Yoshino so readily hug someone? And there's no explanation for why Yoshino's personality changed like this...
I'm not ready to write anymore. I still have some drafts saved up, so I'll post them over the next few days.
I heard the author passed away, is that true? Apparently, he contracted the pandemic?
Keep it up!
Well, the novel's direction is quite complete. Firstly, a male-centric dating sim is quite appealing, as there aren't many authors writing this style, highlighting the importance of choosing the right subject matter. I've been reading your (Electric Mouse's) novel; it's different from the old gay man's. Although you've also portrayed the male protagonist as a goofy and humorous character, it feels somewhat more sentimental. This ambiguity, neither purely comedic nor purely sentimental, creates a sense of ambiguity, which might explain why its readership hasn't skyrocketed. The plot is absolutely fine, great, and very interesting. However, I suggest figuring out the male protagonist's...
I want to update too, but unfortunately I don't have time. I also have exams coming up, and I'm getting really criticized by my teacher, so I'm in a really bad mood. Plus, all my drafts have disappeared. You should be thankful I'm still alive.
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Although Date A Live fanfiction is practically everywhere now, it's become so common it's practically overdone. However, I still feel a deep connection to certain parts of the novel; it truly reflects the protagonist's growth. I've written about three Date A Live fanfictions, not online, but in print. Honestly, I always started with great enthusiasm, but each time I gave up before reaching halfway. I don't know why. I'd read it over and over again, always feeling it was poorly written; I'd revise it again and again, always feeling it was great; but when I read it again the next day, I felt...
Well written, keep it up!
At first glance, I thought it was about Mayuri from the cover, but it's not, which is a bit awkward. The male protagonist in the novel is a spirit, the only male spirit, and Shido has to win him over—that sounds interesting! It's a really clever idea, I think it's great, very bold. Originally, Shido's harem was taken by the protagonist, which is hilarious! л̵ʱªʱªʱª (ᕑᗢᓫา∗)˒ As the only male spirit, she actually has to be won over—isn't that fun? It's good, author, keep it up!
I visited the graves here on April 6th.
Can the author please stop postponing projects?
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