About Becoming a Beautiful NPC Girl

Has anyone considered that the protagonist is actually a person in this virtual world, but has been injected with simulated memories, making him believe that he was once human, and that all of this is just a sociological experiment on human beings by a rebellious AI?

I feel that watching too much of this will cause me to become disconnected from human society and turn me into a strange creature.

I couldn't continue reading after the "Greedy Volume" ended, for several reasons, which I'll list below. 1. The book is riddled with typos and grammatical errors. Almost every paragraph contains strange and unusual typos and grammatical mistakes, such as various odd misspellings, misuse of idioms, and strange punctuation. Some errors clearly indicate the author simply didn't proofread, while others can be attributed to weak writing skills. I even doubted whether the author's Chinese language proficiency was at least at the elementary school level. Poor writing style can be attributed to a lack of personal ability—after all, most authors are amateurish—but an article rife with typos and grammatical errors is not worth the reader's time...

I've been following this book since before it was even released, and even reread it twice when I was bored. Finally, I've decided to write a review and have some things to say to the author. This is a refreshing and excellent work. The protagonist's character design: after entering the virtual world, she undergoes a gender swap, becoming an absolutely adorable little girl (??) Loli. The system also implants a loli-ification plugin, making her future cute (and cheesy) actions seem less abrupt and avoiding many character character collapses. At the same time, her various skills as a loli are extremely cute, and the debuffs of being delicate, weak, and easily pushed over are truly outrageous (and cheesy)...

The protagonist seems a bit intellectually challenged. These days, science fiction protagonists either feign madness or play the victim. Can't they be a little more original? If they can't write that, they should look at similar supernatural transformation novels on other websites. Overall, the theme is novel; the protagonist could easily rely on intelligence, but he deliberately acts stupid. However, the protagonist's transformation feels too rapid, making him seem like an idiot. Otherwise, it's alright. I just hope the author does better in their next book...

Having read SuperFlight (SF) for six years, I guess I'd call myself a veteran newbie. Over those six years, I've read countless SF RPGs, and most follow a similar formula. Only a "very few" stand out as truly unique and refreshing. The majority suffer from overly formulaic character designs for various reasons, and their plots often lack a long-term outline, leading to frequent cancellations or anticlimactic endings. SF's editors used to joke with us, saying, "These light novel authors can describe beautiful girls so cutely, can't they come up with something interesting to write about..."

Looking back, most of the transformation stories in SF now don't have the same feel as before.

Yeah, perfect! As long as Kirito crossdresses, most of the people in our group will give you their monthly votes. So crossdressing, as long as crossdressing… Can you really bear to see those cuties in the group heartbroken? …Just kidding. I think this book is pretty good. The writing isn't the strongest, but it's not weak either. And this book… covers a wide range of topics. By the way… I support his next book, it's about… I won't reveal it yet, Xia Zheng, see you there… emmm, not 450 words yet? Let me tell you, Kirito is really good, you can be friends with him, he's really great. By the way, I'm one of the cuties in the group.

A meter tall and still called a loli...

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