After We Broke Up, She Became My Fiancée

At first, I unconsciously identified with the character of the "burden" in this book, but as it progressed, the characters became more vivid, and the story's pacing was excellent with strong logic (finally, I've found an author with a normal thought process!). Regarding the author's lack of success, I think there are two possible reasons: 1. Promotion channels. This book is an artifact I unearthed after searching through countless romance novels, and having frequented SF (a Chinese online forum) for years, I think many people check their bookmarks first when searching for a book (and the author's title is rather ordinary in this era where I don't even realize I'm a novel author). This creates a vicious cycle. 2. The reading pace is fast; there are some grammatical errors in the beginning...

I suddenly realized that this book has been serialized for over a year. Thank you all for your support along the way. The remaining two epilogues and some side stories will be completed in the next couple of days, after which it will be a formal farewell. I am deeply grateful for everyone's companionship throughout this book's journey. My future writing plans are "Divorce" and Jiang Qingqing, which I started writing a long time ago. To be honest, the main reason for the slow progress is my own low work efficiency, and also because I became too engrossed in the main character of this book, and couldn't write about other characters simultaneously.

I've finally managed to write this, stumbling along from summer to autumn, then winter to spring, and now it's finally finished! Compared to other long stories, there's not much left. Finally, if I can finish before college application season, I might write a short side story about college applications if I have some free time. After that, I'll probably write a childhood friend story. I absolutely adore Shinichi and Ran, but I waited ten years for their cheek kiss, so I'll have to write a childhood friend story myself to satisfy myself.

Last month I said that I would finish writing this at the beginning of the month. Now I'm about 80% done. If I end it abruptly, readers might not notice, but it would be a huge letdown for the outline, the characters, myself, and all the readers. I slightly overestimated my update speed and underestimated my brainpower, so... I can't finish it for now.

Thank you all, everyone.

1. It's almost finished; I expect it to be completed by early next month or this month. 2. First-person perspective has its limitations. Future stories about childhood sweethearts will definitely use a different writing style and perspective. 3. As I wrote, I turned myself into a staunch non-marriage advocate. Actually, I'm quite fulfilled in real life, but suddenly I've become a romantic nihilist. Finding a perfect, tailor-made true love in this world is so difficult.

It's well-written, though there are occasional typos and awkward phrasing. The overall concept is excellent. The plot progresses a bit slowly in the first few dozen chapters, but that's just my personal preference. The scene descriptions aren't very strong; they could be improved, as excellent scene descriptions can create a better atmosphere. I hope the author can proofread the text after finishing and correct any typos or rearrange the sentence structure. Finally, I recommend everyone read it; it's a good work.

I was initially drawn to this book by its title because of my own experience with a breakup. I ventured to guess that the author might have a sad story about their first love, weaving that complex emotion into the writing, which I found very moving. The plot is well-structured; while the timeline might seem a bit disjointed at first glance, this non-linear narrative adds a unique intrigue. The biggest unresolved question so far is the truth behind the breakup, which I believe will be resolved well. Providing a reading order, including when to read the epilogue, would make the reading experience smoother. The use of shifting perspectives in the writing is unlike anything I've seen before; perhaps it's because I haven't read enough...

There's no one here anymore.

I've finished reading. Thank you for your hospitality!