Shi Fangming never imagined that the sword he forged would be his undoing. Nor did he expect that the one who would send him, the Demon Lord, to hell would be his adopted daughter, Murong Li, whom he loved as dearly as his own child.
A living sacrifice to the sword, an evil spirit takes over his body. Looking at his frail young girl's body, Shi Fangming gives a bitter smile. So now he's the third young lady of the Fan family?
"Just become my sword and do as you're told, okay?" Murong Li says with a radiant smile.
"..." That little brat is going to cut off my hands and feet, isn't she?
The Lord of Devouring Clouds becomes a sword spirit, and also the number one escape artist in the cultivation world, fleeing his adopted daughter's attempts to kill him.
I apologize everyone. Because I've already published all 40,000 words of my draft, updates may become irregular. If I have the opportunity in the future, I will try my best to finish it. Whether this book will be published or not is no longer important. Thank you all for your support over the past five months. As for when I'll have a new book, it's probably not going to be for the next month or two. However, I am indeed writing a new book. Thank you again everyone 😊.
After thinking about it, I realized that the first volume actually has 70 chapters. I'm the kind of person who feels uncomfortable if I don't write details, but if I do, I feel like the main plot has been stretched out, and I'm afraid readers will say it's padded. This is truly a dilemma!
There's only one update for Blade & Soul today, but there's an extra preview chapter. If you're interested, feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments. Also, I'm planning to release two chapters simultaneously…
I'm a nitpicker
I'm a nitpicker, but I gave it 10 stars because I really like the genre and the story. But this writing style!!! I was completely baffled by chapter 12. The perspective shifts were infuriating. The retro, colloquial style is okay, but at least the sentences are complete! Does the author read each chapter aloud after writing it? There are parts where I understand what's being said, but it's still incomprehensible. There's also the issue of person; the two main characters are confused—one minute Murong Li, the next a young girl, then Shi Fangming, then back to a young girl again. In your style, is it consistent? Yes, the author adds commas to make a very simple sentence longer, I don't understand...
This opening left me completely bewildered.
There's no update today. I'll do a big update later, counting the word counts of the repeated paragraphs; I estimated it to be around 10,000 words. If there are any repeated chapters now, I can refresh the page tomorrow.
I'm taking a break today to write the outline for the next chapter. I'll make up for it with two chapters tomorrow, no rush!
Why has it stopped updating? It's clearly very well-written. I've read it at least seven times since 2019, and I'm really looking forward to the later parts, but the author hasn't updated at all. I hope the author can fill in the gaps!
Don't be a eunuch
I've started a new book!