The Internet-Addicted Girl Doesn't Fall in Love

To be honest, this book has way too many explicit scenes, and there's even some plausible evidence to support them. It's definitely not suitable for readers with poor ergonomics. However, overall the writing is good, and I highly recommend it. It's also one of my favorite genres (haha). The author's character descriptions are very vivid and lifelike. However, the plot is slightly lacking. If the author starts a new book, I hope they can carefully refine and develop the plot and emotions. These are just my personal opinions; please don't be offended if you disagree.

The author's writing is excellent, and the characters are vividly portrayed. However, having just finished reading "Your Man Makes You Update," going back to "Internet Addict Girl" makes me suspect the author is relying on past successes. In other words, it lacks originality compared to the previous book. Since I only recently read the last one, this one doesn't have the same impact. If the author truly intends to make a living solely through novel writing, this approach won't last long. Nevertheless, I really love the characters the author has created. (Well, good luck, author!)

I haven't written many book reviews, and my writing skills are poor, so I can only write according to my own thoughts, please forgive me. I personally really like the (pseudo) emotionless loli character design, but I feel that the portrayal of this "emotionless" setting in the story isn't strong enough. For example, some descriptions of actions and inner monologues are not very noticeable (although there has been a lot of improvement compared to before; previously, it almost felt like the character design was simply applied, but in recent chapters, the deliberate writing is quite obvious, and it would be better if it were more natural). As for the plot, I feel that some parts of the plot...

This is the second novel by this author I've followed that features a "marriage change" theme. The first one left a deep impression on me; the author's portrayal of the characters' emotions and the way she delivered the sweet moments captivated me. Later, I looked for similar novels, but none of them depicted the romantic development as well as the author did. The gradual transformation of a boy's heart towards a real girl happened so subtly, almost unconsciously, like water flowing naturally. I've reread the first book many times; the warm, sweet moments and everyday scenes are unforgettable. There's no angst, only delicate sweetness. It's all pure sweetness, lighthearted and humorous, offering respite for a weary heart...

Following Xia Yin to read Bai Xia, the difference is obvious. I don't know which book I started reading first, but both the handling of the romance and the plot are too mediocre. Compared to modern themes, I think the fantasy genre suits the author better. The plot of this book is a bit fragmented. I didn't finish the second chapter and don't really want to spend money to continue, because even without the marriage element, there aren't many highlights. From the transformation to cohabitation to the amusement park trip, the only ups and downs are Bai Xia's identity and the "treatment" arranged by her father. Putting aside the question of whether it's reasonable to leave one's daughter to a man, the absorption...

The synopsis is really to my liking, but what if there are no more updates? I really want to see more!

I thought it had been updated, but then I saw the year was 2021...

Author, your man is calling you to update! This is the only completed novel among all your works besides that one posted on Tieba. It's also what I'd say about all your unfinished novels. You say it yourself, but you don't deliver. It really disappoints me… Sigh, I used to follow you on Tieba like a pro… So many years have passed, and you've become like this. Don't you feel even a little bit sorry for your eight-year-old readers? Back then, you were saying this to other authors, and now your man is calling you to fill in the gaps.

Having read over 300 chapters, my admiration for the author has only grown stronger. Putting aside the beautiful writing and excellent plot, the portrayal of the transmigrator's identity alone is superb, even achieving a near-perfect ending (not referring to the final chapter). Personally, I've always felt that if the transmigrator's identity isn't utilized effectively and only refers to "transmigration," then this identity is merely a tedious burden, something that can be easily discarded. This book, however, is different from most others I've read. It brilliantly develops the connection between Bai Xia and the original owner's soul. Regarding the plot, while some parts may seem illogical at first glance, upon closer inspection…

Good news: He survived. Bad news: He forgot everything.