The Lord's Record of Control

This is just my personal opinion, corrections and criticisms are welcome, but please refrain from mindless attacks. I've only read up to Chapter 10 of the Reform Movement section, but I couldn't continue. It's not that the writing is bad, but I felt the plot was somewhat illogical. When I was reading the free parts, I thought it would be a personal adventure story about collecting slaves while following the main plot, but as I read on, it turned into Allen's founding of a nation?? Especially now, I'm completely confused. Let me explain why I'm so bewildered. First, the biggest point I want to complain about is the theme of nation-building and politics (which is really common), but I'm not saying that reading too much of it makes it formulaic and uninteresting, but rather that this kind of...

It suddenly occurred to me that this world doesn't have GPS navigation. The weapon Allen used to attack the Jin Dynasty's air force wasn't called an anti-aircraft rocket, but a missile, specifically a surface-to-air missile, and it was equipped with a microprocessor computer. This suggests that the missile's guidance method is similar to that of some active terminal guidance air-to-air missiles currently used by air forces. One approach is that the missile itself has a small radar (this type is less flexible due to its small radar cross-section, and early, simpler versions were not widely used), and the other is that it has a built-in thermal sensor to track heat sources. The Jin Dynasty's air force used "spirit wood," and since it's made of wood, it should be able to withstand...

As a light novel, aside from the fast pace, it doesn't have many other problems. However, there are some parts that I wish could have omitted, otherwise it's incredibly awkward. For example, the gun-making and gun parts feel very out of place. After all, not everyone likes playing PUBG (`⌒´メ) super fierce. The most significant flaw is the portrayal and transformation of female emotions, which is just too awkward... Damn it, the 140-character limit! Damn it, the 140-character limit! Damn it, the 140-character limit! Damn it, the 140-character limit!

The subject matter is excellent, and the writing style is typical of light novels—it has a comic book feel. I absolutely love the author; I've been reading his novels for a long time, and I feel he's improved a lot. In my opinion, this novel is definitely worth reading, although I still like the author's earlier, more playful style... But he's toned it down a lot now. The plot is quite good, and I really enjoy the author's novels. Keep it up, author! By the way, I really love the character of the younger sister in the author's novel, and also the little fox-eared girl!

Later I discovered that the author himself admitted that the borderline erotic story was forcibly changed into a farming story, resulting in illogical plot points and some inconsistencies, making for a poor reading experience. Moreover, the farming aspect was somewhat disgusting, and some of the values were questionable (even though it's an isekai story, it went a bit too far).

First, let's talk about the advantages: 1. The male protagonist isn't a saint; he has strong judgment and can handle problems correctly, unlike some mindless farming novels where everything is rushed (like sending someone to kill the opponent). 2. The setting is a slave society, and the social progression is refreshing. The male protagonist, as the main character, doesn't let lust cloud his judgment, which is commendable! 3. The protagonist's past life experiences are quite interesting and substantial, avoiding mindless, one-step plot progression (like the sickle and hammer). My personal observations on the shortcomings: 1. Around 350,000-360,000 words, the memory rewind (maybe) feels somewhat familiar (like the witch arc on a certain website)...

Sacrificing new humanity for the sake of past glory? Nonsense! The new world has its own order and path. This presumptuous interference, under such a guise, is disgusting. Author, please improve! You write wonderfully; keep it up! Besides, this book is very immersive, and the content feels very realistic. The protagonist doesn't have many cheat abilities, and the development is gradual. I give it a very high rating. Please keep up the good work! Also, please be sure to include the continental invasion scenes! I'm a war enthusiast; if you create an alternate world version of Dongfeng, V2, Patriot, M1, etc., It will be incredibly exciting! I'll see if I can give you some more rewards then.

I only paid to see the little succubus regain her strength, so let me comment objectively: First, the male lead becomes less and less interesting as the story progresses. The early part, with its isekai transmigration, harem, and race collection, was quite good. The male lead's impotence is acceptable, since this is a legitimate novel website, but author, your writing doesn't evoke much emotion in me. The characters feel lifeless, you know? The male lead doesn't feel like a man to me, but rather like a programmed machine; from another perspective, he's a slave.

I originally intended to share my thoughts on this book, but I found that a friend nicknamed "Fim" had similar opinions, so I'll keep it brief. First, let me clarify that everything I say below is purely my personal opinion and not intended to be offensive. Initially, I was drawn to the book by its title and synopsis, but the more I read, the more interesting it became. When I reached a particularly exciting part, the book required payment, so I had to spend a "little bit" to continue. Honestly, I now regret paying to continue reading. While the beginning of the book was indeed interesting, it became increasingly dull towards the end...

A very good premise and a good setting, but the pacing is too rushed. The plot is too hurried; what could have been hundreds of chapters of story was crammed into just over ten. There's insufficient emotional buildup, the female characters' struggles aren't explored enough, and it's a mindless, straightforward progression that fails to ignite any passion. It's all just a series of moments of reflection. (Except for the Red Dragon Queen, which slightly piqued my interest.) This might be acceptable for a scriptwriter, but this is a novel; you need to learn how to pad the word count without it being obvious. (Manual sarcasm) (Okay, maybe it's related to the recent crackdown?) ------By: A shameless troll who speaks without understanding the situation.