I'm Back, and I'm the Second Herrscher

When I returned to the dorm that day, I saw my roommate on the top bunk lying on the floor, his eyes rolled back, foaming at the mouth, yelling, "Hey! Good! I've got it!" He had a bucket of instant noodles on his right foot. The rest of us were panicked. I glanced at him and saw his shattered phone to his right, its surface gleaming. Remembering I was a medical student, I asked them, "How long has it been?" They said about half an hour. I calmly said, "There's hope. Did he go anywhere this morning?" They said no, he'd just inexplicably borrowed 5,000 yuan saying he needed it urgently, and then while everyone was sleeping, he was playing on his phone and that's how he ended up like this. I clicked...

Excellent! The content really suits my taste. I hope the author will continue to persevere. It's really hard to leave a comment on my favorite author's and book's introduction page with such a sentimental feeling. Because I've been playing Honkai Impact 3rd recently, I thought of reading Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction. This is the first one I've read, and I really love it because I really like the character Herrscher of Reason in the game. Also, I'm currently grinding for the Sirin's Ascended stigmata set. Also, because I was reading your novel, I didn't step on the ladder when I got out of bed in my dorm and fell, breaking my thumb. I'll remember this (•́へ•́ ╬)! To make the author compensate me, I hope...

Hmmm, I personally prefer reading stories about systems, and I've also played Honkai Impact 3rd (level 60), though I'm a casual player. The writing in the first few chapters was really... Well, it felt like it was written by a primary school student. There were too many repeated words, and the characters' dialogue and actions felt staged. Since I'm someone who never reads the story in games, I didn't understand the plot at all. After flipping through a bit, the writing improved significantly; at least it didn't feel like something a primary school student would write. There were also a few too many exclamation marks, giving the impression of shouting. Perhaps the tone wasn't quite right in the first few chapters...

The protagonist's soul is probably male, but he transmigrated into Xilin. I feel his personality is far too feminine, or as some might say, too effeminate. All that whining and acting silly is rather unpleasant to watch. After reading the first few chapters, up to the part about China, even I, with my supposedly immune-to-all-poison constitution, just wanted to shout, "So toxic!" It's like a primary school student's essay, something like, "My mom praised me today, I'm so happy!" And I really don't understand it. He just gives the commander a jade slip without saying anything. I think the author could truly immerse themselves in Xilin, and after that, reflect on their own actions, and you'll realize...

I'm very sorry for what I said before. To be honest, life is getting harder and harder these days; without a high level of education, it's hard to find a good job. You're right, you have no right to play the victim, but I also have no right to comment on you. These days, most novelists either stop writing or abandon their projects; there aren't many authors with a conscience like you anymore. If you're tired, take a rest. Don't push yourself too hard; your health is the most important thing. I'll be waiting for your next chapter. Keep going! I support you.

The early plot was alright, with the familiar invincible queenly aura and a touch of warmth. Although I don't usually enjoy this kind of healing story, I persevered because of Her Majesty the Queen's heroic bearing. However, I was very disappointed, very disappointed, because what I saw wasn't the expected awakening of the queen, but just a clown hired by a monkey, and an unprofessional one at that. The queenly aura was gone, leaving only ignorance and childishness. Some might find it cute, but this cuteness belongs to the harem, not the protagonist. Or has Cecilia unknowingly taken over the protagonist's position? Don't believe me? Just look at how she crushes...

The beginning was fun, but the later parts... Are you targeting single people? Why does it feel like you're the one writing this? And why are all your system quests ending with one character dying, and why does your system appear so infrequently? I bet you'll run out of steam later. Hopefully, you can get back to the Honkai Impact 3rd main storyline soon. And is your Sirin really that invincible? Instantly killing monsters? What's the point?! You can only revive one person. Your writing has completely fallen apart.

I think the most brilliant part of this book, and what keeps it entertaining (and absurd), is the author's use of some unknown "plot coherence gem." What? You say my logic is flawed? What? You say the protagonist's character contradicts miHoYo's style? The plot coherence gem. In short, all the funny (absurd) plot points can be explained in one sentence—I drew the plot coherence gem! It completely eliminates retconning, allowing the author to write with boundless imagination. Of course, this is related to the author's novel ideas, boundless imagination, and ability to create funny (absurd) plots. In short, it's very much to my...

The author's imagination has exceeded my expectations. I've read many novels similar to the infinite flow, otherworldly, and system genres, but the characters the author has created have given me a different feeling. Reading the author's books is truly enjoyable; reading novels is a way to relax and have fun, and the author excels in this aspect. There are so many Honkai Impact 3rd fanfictions online, but most of them are ridiculous, either copying the original plot verbatim or rigidly adhering to it, making them unreadable. They don't even qualify as mindless wish-fulfillment stories; they're just idiotic works. The author's novel about the three main characters seems to be more than just a way to make people laugh; it's a creative endeavor...

Honkai Impact 3rd really released Sirin, please update soon!