Why Can't an Ordinary Guy Like Me Get Away from Them?
平凡的我怎么还是摆脱不了她们
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 380k Words
- Genre
- Campus
- Updated
- 7y ago
- English
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All-time: Clicks, Favorites, Likes.
192Chapters
1.6MClicks
8.4kFavorites
8.7Score
2.8kLikes
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To prevent your irrational thinking, let's end it. Although it's become the type I least wanted,... All my efforts couldn't earn everyone's approval, so this book is meaningless.
It's alright.
This book is not meant to be read with your brain, not with your brain, not with your brain (I'm saying it three times because it's important). At first, I glanced at it, and the author seemed to be aiming for that kind of pretentious urban style, which resulted in incredibly awkward writing. But since it's a new book, I just skimmed through it. Reading novels is just a way to pass the time, after all. I hope the author will improve the plot details later on; every time I read it, it was incredibly awkward.
Tomb sweeping
Tomb sweeping~ Tomb sweeping~ I sweep my own tomb~
Still need to cultivate
I suggest you read more traditional literature to gain some depth, such as Shakespeare's trilogy or *Dream of the Red Chamber*, which would be very helpful. The plot development in your book is too smooth... Urban fantasy novels don't seem to thrive on this platform, since most online novels are like that, and we're all tired of them. However, there's a saying that's quite good: "It's not because he's the protagonist that he's powerful, but because he's powerful that he's the protagonist." But there are too many protagonists like that; at least try a different writing style. But I'm a newbie, and I don't know how to write either, so I'm just sharing my subjective opinion. I hope the author continues to do well. Okay, that's all...
Wow, time to visit the graves! I'll come back and continue updating when I have time. I'll definitely reach 500,000 words, trust me.
Why doesn't everyone check out the new book? Didn't you all already criticize it to the point of ending? The new book is called "I'm Not a Simp: Demon King or Hero?" Those of you still reading, come and warm things up!
One person wrote this in blood, begging the author to continue!
I took a look, and it seems there's a campus essay contest. Let's move on to another location!
A mudslide in SF
My suggestion is, since you're not going to use your brain while reading, don't worry about how stupid the plot is. First of all, it has a strong Qidian (Chinese web novel) vibe. If it weren't for the light novel feel, I wouldn't even think it's a light novel. And SF (a Chinese web novel platform) is known for its flat-chested characters (whispering). You can't make the plot coherent like this. The system in the middle doesn't feel like it's helping the male lead; it's just a boring, traditional web novel writing style. This kind of pretentious urban fantasy will probably not survive on Qidian, and even if it does, it will be very rare. It's better to attract more readers while SF's readership is small. If the author really wants to write something with a pretentious feel, they should do it on SF...