Escape from This Demon

The author has something to do and won't be updating this year. I know it's my fault, but this book is basically doomed at this point. Maybe next year. Next time, I will definitely put in my best effort to write it.

Well, how should I put it? I think the description of her life before her rebirth could be revised or even deleted. It leaves significant gaps in the female lead's later actions and thought processes. Her identity is arguably her greatest asset; initially at home, she never considered seeking help from her family, even when she was threatened. She faced threats and sought help from strangers instead of focusing on her more reliable and close family. Regarding the issue of faking her depression, she tried to pretend in front of others, even though she was afraid of being exposed. Her biggest fear was that Yan Li would find out, but it was unlikely that someone else would tell Yan Li, given Yan Li's eccentric personality...

Subscriptions are so few, it's almost not enough to make a living. I'm taking a day off to reflect on why I'm doing this.

The beginning was absolutely captivating! My first thought was, "How come it wasn't banned?!" The content is way too explicit! Good heavens, the author is practically flirting with censorship!

This book is well-written, and I predict it will become popular. The main issues are as follows: 1. The complex relationships of love, hate, and revenge between the characters are presented in a few thousand words, creating a reading barrier for some readers. Readers sometimes skim through new books, which makes it difficult for them to grasp these seemingly simple character relationships. I suggest briefly mentioning them and then detailing them later in the story. 2. The protagonist's inner monologues seem excessive and could be appropriately shortened and condensed. Too much psychological description makes the writing feel disjointed and negatively impacts the reading experience. Otherwise, it's quite good...

The famous writer Lu Xun once said, "In the world of pigeons, a day is forty-eight hours." From this statement, we can conclude that the author has not been late in updating, understand? Anyone who dares to say I'm late will have to answer to me!

This book is so bad, how come someone gave it 10 stars?

The book is alright overall, but the plot development, world-building, and logic feel awkward. He could easily live off his family fortune, but he stubbornly clings to it. Also, as I approached the paid content, the protagonist remained as useless as ever—truly a complete idiot who never lifts a finger. Wasn't he a shut-in (in his past life)? Shouldn't he at least have some skills? No saintess, no wife, no "three-no" (no ego, no tsundere), no tsundere. So far, all I've seen is him whining when his manly spirit is gone. I hope the author continues to work on developing his skills. When I saw the kidnapping scene, I thought he was going to be gone for a year or two, doing plagiarism, and then...

Let's get to the point first. In this work, the "older sister" is the central character, and the author has done a fantastic job of crafting her into a main character. While I can't quite summarize her personality, she gives me the impression of being very deep and not easily understood at first glance. Achieving this effect means the author has already succeeded more than halfway! 👍 Secondly, as mentioned above, the author's strength lies in character development. The descriptions of her language, expressions, and inner thoughts are vivid and directly reflect the character's...

Let me preface this by saying that because I've played quite a few games, I pay particular attention to graphics and details. Therefore, I will only discuss the application of details in the text. This is solely my personal opinion. First, the scene details in the work are lacking! Since I haven't finished reading it, I'll just give a few simple examples. The first is in the scene where the female protagonist is tied up, awakened by the demon sister's voice, and in a state of terror, naturally her first glance is at the sister. However, during the part where the mother returns home and the protagonist is released, there should be more description of the interior decorations along the way, even if it's brief, the point is to hint at it...