Eldest Sister, heir to the Sword Sect, searches for plum blossoms in the snow but cannot find them. She looks around, yet sees no one. A chill stirs at her neck, a flash of cold light, and her head is gone.
Second Sister, Holy Maiden of the Demon Cult: one smile brings a hundred charms, two smiles topple a city, and three smiles let you start over. She dares defy Heaven and turn the world upside down.
Third Sister, a medical prodigy: she can restore flesh to white bones, and unravel schemes with a single thread. A prescription worth a thousand gold is hard to come by, even for ten thousand taels.
Fourth Brother, a good-for-nothing.
Eldest Sister: My little brother isn't a good-for-nothing. Anyone who thinks he is, is.
Second Sister: If you want to love me, you have to love my little brother first.
Third Sister: The prescription costs fifty thousand taels. Don't complain, it's still not enough to pay for my little brother's medicine.
Completed work: Fellow Daoist, Hurry Up and Ascend!
The early chapters with his sister were pretty good.
The beginning was good, but now there are subtle signs of it collapsing. The older sister is frequently absent, the younger brother is constantly being kidnapped, and the plot is always driven by the Spirit Market. However, the combat power in the Spirit Market is completely different from that in the original world. Since it's like Voldemort, the older sister's combat power will definitely be very high later on. It remains to be seen how the younger brother will "again" swindle and deceive people in the Spirit Market, which will inevitably involve more kidnapping. By the way, if a few chapters are padded out like this, the novel will fall apart. The beginning was good, but it's too easy to get padded out.
Is this some kind of desperate attempt to make a quick buck by writing a chapter or two? The author inexplicably stops updating, then comes back spouting platitudes. Life is tough for everyone, but since you've published and started charging, regardless of how much you earn, it's a job. With this kind of work attitude, how can you complain about your job? Do you think your readers' money grows on trees? You just disappear without a trace. What about the readers' rights as consumers?
Well, this is the first book I've seen that was abandoned, and I quite like this premise. I'll write a heartwarming ending for myself, so the author doesn't have to worry about it. It's a little memento for myself. I just followed the author today, and I'm unfollowing them today too, sigh. Treat your books like your own children; if you can't stick with it, don't start a new book. Even if you can't continue writing, please give it a good ending and show it respect. This is my last piece of advice to the author.
He quit writing; all he did was complain about the readers and run away with the money.
Maybe that's a bit harsh.
Actually, I initially wanted to give it the lowest rating, but after reading the author's latest post, I decided against it. The book started off very well; the theme was novel, the author's writing was good, and the use of tropes was excellent. Everything seemed so wonderful. However, it became increasingly clichéd later on, with the plot repeating the same old formula: the male lead getting captured and kidnapped repeatedly. I was initially drawn in by the synopsis, thinking the older sisters would be invincible, but they weren't the absolute powerhouses of the book, nor were they overwhelmingly powerful among their peers, and they didn't seem to be able to protect the male lead. Then the sisters' master appeared, and some old man from another world suddenly became incredibly powerful...
The author has been diagnosed with pneumonia and passed away.
Author, your recent writing has been so boring.
It's not as interesting as before... So boring, so boring ヽ(ー_ー)ノ It used to be funny with a story, a sister liking a brother, and everyday humor, but now there's so much rambling, and the disjointed parts are... Well, confusing... Sigh. I don't want to say anything, I just hope it's not as engaging as the beginning... ????????????
Be a man of integrity, not confined to one city, one family, or one dream.
This book review is for both you, my fellow Daoist, and for the brother-supporting demon. My friend, I don't know your situation, nor can I truly empathize with you. I can only try my best to understand you based on my current lifestyle. Let's start with the review itself. The writing is quite good for a book like "Pineapple Bun," though the plot is a bit drawn out. There's a lot of back-and-forth entanglement, but the character development is truly excellent. Even if this book were abandoned, it would still be worth reading. A scene that left a deep impression on me was when Xun Shuang heard that Huai Yu had been bullied and risked her life to save her, and Huai Yu hugged Xun Shuang, choking back tears as she said she would help her pay off her debts. That scene warmed my heart; it felt like I had a gentle older sister of my own. ...
Those who want to accuse me of plagiarism, please see below.
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Seriously, I'm fed up! Every time I order a book, it gets abandoned halfway through. Doesn't anyone care about this? We pay money to read these books, and every time it's gone halfway through, it's like we're treated like idiots.