In the vast world, the Immortal Way reigns supreme. Huai Men of the Immortal Sect is one of the strongest cultivation sects:
Second disciple Su Muyu was born with an innate demonic constitution. If she stays here too long, she'll surely become a monster.
Third disciple Ji Mobai was born with a Dao body. Anyone who cultivates with him in dual cultivation is destined to attain the Dao and become an immortal.
Fourth disciple Yuan Xi was born with peerless beauty, captivating all living beings.
Fifth disciple Shao Ling was born with an ethereal body. Given time, she will surely look down upon the Three Realms.
As the eldest disciple, I, Ye Yinfeng, am under a lot of pressure.
"Junior Sister, we're not cultivating together in dual cultivation!!!"
"Don't come any closer!"
I can't keep being the senior brother anymore!
One extra chapter for every 10,000 tips, with 50 chapters owed after going premium.
It's too pretentious.
Does the author think that a messy timeline makes their book seem impressive? The writing is truly awful; it feels like a series of disjointed short stories that don't connect into a cohesive whole. This is a novel, not short stories, okay? There are also some forced attempts at emotional manipulation that are incredibly awkward to read. If the atmosphere isn't there, don't force it! Instead of leaving plot points undeveloped, they force spoilers early on. We're not stupid; we already know what we need to know. There's no need to explicitly point it out. And they forcibly plant things that shouldn't be foreshadowed. I'm not a professional novelist, and I don't know much about this...
No more delays... I'll update soon.
I want to see it, keep it up!
I'm really looking forward to the next episode, but I'm also worried the author might make a mistake and write a story where the eldest brother is mentally unstable, and what if my Yingfeng doesn't get married? Master Huaixian, just you wait, he'll make the arrangements, understand? ≖‿≖✧. ... ...
Worth watching
The part I read gave me a strong sense of déjà vu, reminding me of my beloved senior brother's idiotic personality. I hope the author can break free from this book's influence in the later parts (the latter part is just to pad the word count) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (ಡωಡ) (づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─● )づ(づ●─●...
I'll update when I get home on the 7th...
A strong sense of déjà vu
After reading the first few chapters, wow, this is so similar to "My Senior Brother Has a Hole in His Brain"! Besides the characters of Master and Fourth Junior Sister, their relationships are also the same. Maybe it's just a coincidence, but I hope the plot won't be the same later on. This is my first long review, so please feel free to point out any mistakes ^0^~ (I couldn't find the word count to be 140, so I had to use this method to reach it!)
Character design can
It would be better to just collect the whole harem and write it as a wish-fulfillment story. The flashbacks are so confusing. A protagonist who levels up can also be invincible. Of course, the author's own ideas are also important; there's no need to pander to others. ╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯ ╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰╯╰
Keep it up, Fengfeng!
I'm a long-time reader of Fengfeng's works, having followed his books consistently. I feel his writing is really good, so I'm writing a long review today… (This is also my first time writing a long review). As we all know, fantasy and martial arts are overused genres in China, and I'm sure many readers have read quite a few. The quality varies greatly, and writing a good one is very difficult. Although it's a light novel, Fengfeng's writing style is quite good. Personally, I really enjoyed this novel; it was a very enjoyable read. Now, let's talk about the novel itself. It still features a traditional single protagonist (judging from the title), and the background… well…
Master-disciple romance, pseudo-gay, the best!
As it stands, the author is heavily in debt. However, the plot is decent; the master-disciple romance is quite enjoyable. If the author were to portray the male protagonist's junior brother's relationship as gay, this kind of "quirky" book would be quite rare, and the thought is a little exciting. If the pacing slows down and more romance is added, it could be a great work. One last small issue: this review needs to be over 140 characters, so...
Keep it up, Feng Feng! _(:з"∠)_
I'm practically a long-time reader of yours. I see you working and writing every day in the group, it must be tough for you. I really hope you get some rest, because health is the most important thing. Don't worry, we'll all support you. Recently, a big spender even gave you 636! Most of the protagonists in Yin Feng Feng's books are weak and submissive, which also reflects that Yin Feng Feng is one of them. From now on, please give more monthly tickets and generous rewards! Can you join the group and tease Yin Feng Feng sometime? Go Yin Feng Feng! (｡ò ∀ ó｡)