Why Do My Heavenly Demon Disciples All Want to Possess Their Master?

The book's premise was good, but the writing was truly terrible. The most typical problem was the author's style—to put it nicely, it was ethereal; to put it bluntly, it was affected and pretentious. There was no substance to it, and while the author tried to be pretentious, they failed to achieve the desired effect. The story simply didn't meet expectations. Why was the story so bad? Because it was all about piling up settings and pushing the plot forward, completely disregarding logic. Furthermore, the story didn't fit the title. From the very beginning, losing his disciple was a clichéd and idiotic plot point. Just for the sake of going to Phoenix Nest, both the male protagonist and his disciple's personalities collapsed. Then, the male protagonist never improved his strength, nor did he teach his disciple. Knowing he wasn't invincible, why didn't he cultivate? He took on a disciple and taught him…

I initially thought this book was a harem novel about a master and his disciples, with the male lead reincarnated and the disciples vying to protect him, just like the title suggests. However, after reading the latest chapter, I've discovered it's anything but sweet; instead, it depicts a lot of the ugliness of human nature. In my opinion, it's quite depressing. The male lead, despite his immense power, doesn't manage to turn the tide. He constantly blames himself for the harm he caused his disciples in the past, saying that even the strongest former alliance leader dared not oppose the villains, constantly getting ambushed and losing his disciples multiple times. The first chapter builds up a whole book of love-hate entanglements between the protagonist and his disciples, and then in the blink of an eye, it's all over in the first chapter...

This is a classic work with excellent character portrayal and a well-structured plot. I initially wanted to criticize the pointless technical flourishes in the first chapter, but then I realized that since SF's readership is generally young, such flourishes are actually a plus. As I continued reading, I found the character descriptions even more impressive. If there's any drawback… it's written in a female-oriented style, while SF's readership is predominantly male. (Is the author a girl?! *Cries*)

What nonsense are you writing...?

Seeing this book gave me the feeling of wandering around a certain online bookstore or similar place. Well, this place relies heavily on its subject matter, but the good thing is there's no piracy. As for the writing style, it's probably the best here. However, while the writing is good, it lacks vitality. The author describes the cultivation world in a rather ethereal style, striving to depict an ancient Chinese world. This is very successful; the author's scene descriptions are first-rate. However, the transitions, the connections between paragraphs, feel rather stiff. At first glance, the writing style is ethereal, but it also feels scattered and verbose. The characters...

Tomb sweeping

The writing style is good, but it seems a bit disjointed and disjointed.

It's always reminiscing, it's tiring to look at, too messy, and I can't appreciate it.

I think this book is really well-written. I quite like stories with NTR (Netorare) elements. Keep it up, author!

I want a monthly pass.