The world where people with supernatural powers and ordinary people coexist has finally settled into peace. But are humans the only ones who make mistakes? No. As it turns out, gods make mistakes too. The gods who govern the various parallel universes can change people's lives completely with even the smallest misstep.
PS: This is a sequel to the world of The Stunning Beauty's Transformation! But the focus is mainly on another world! A brand-new protagonist! Three storylines! Bringing everyone a different kind of otherworldly adventure!!
PS: This story follows a yuri route, with a slight harem.
PS: There's a huge, exciting bonus surprise midway through the story!! Any guesses what it is, everyone?
I like the story, but!
Author, you're overusing conjunctions way too much! Things like "but," "because," "and," "although," "however," "only," "also," "yet," etc.—You can see over a dozen on a single page! Almost every sentence has a conjunction. Conjunctions can connect logic, but too many make it awkward to read. The previous book didn't seem this obvious! @_@ Also, author, if you want to write different storylines, it's best if each storyline mentions something from another storyline—foreshadowing, hints, or anything else—there should always be a clear connection. And when switching to a different storyline, the most important thing is...
How to put it
This novel has many strengths, but its weaknesses are also obvious. The middle section is too long; the storylines of the other two female leads could easily have been written as side stories. I really appreciate the author's intention to cover the entire plot at once, but the missing parts are enough to make readers forget the male lead's name and the name of the female lead who summons him. Adding the female leads' storylines would be fine, but first, the male and female leads should be firmly imprinted in the reader's mind, so that they don't end up like me, unable to recall their names. Author, you could read other authors' novels or other literary works to build your knowledge base...
We already know this even without it being sent.
Waaah... I want to
Tomb sweeping in 2023
Since things have come to this, let's go sweep the grave.
This novel is ridiculous! It gives the female lead the most powerful abilities and a thousand-year-old spider lily, but all the powerful abilities are used by the original owner of the body; the female lead can't use them even once. She's also inexplicably punished by the gods and her account is banned. After the first chapter, the female lead is practically invisible. And then her wife gets cheated on by two women, leaving her with two green hats (a Chinese idiom for being cheated on). I'm speechless.
If you want to see more of the story about the vampire and Kerr while visiting the grave, and the female lead is building a harem, then let the vampire and Kerr have a one-on-one relationship.
Stinky orange, where is everyone?!
I don't know how many years it's been, but Orange still hasn't updated today. Just came to pay my respects at the grave.