Even After Becoming a Girl, I Still Have to Play Games with My Girlfriends

The beginning of this light novel is too bland and lacks engaging elements, which might deter readers who prefer a fast-paced, action-packed story. Also, the novel feels somewhat like a "game-themed" story, with too much character description and too little game-related detail (this is based on my experience comparing it to other good game novels). There are too few scenes of fighting monsters. I suggest the author change the lottery system from allowing only the first 10,000 players to only 1,000 or even fewer. This would prevent the protagonist's prowess from being overshadowed, and while the effect might be slight, it's better than nothing. The protagonist's strength should also be showcased...

I won't go into too much detail about other aspects, such as commentary on the novel, rhetoric, the distribution of the three elements, and the use of white space; I won't offer my humble opinion. I really want to praise the author regarding the elements and connections in the writing. While the loli rebirth trope is very appealing, could you please not make me this happy? The protagonist's cheerful personality and youthful reserve are what make me smile incessantly. That kind of unrestrained love (or lust) is exactly what I enjoy as an audience member. Of course, the connections remind me of *Jane Eyre*. The extensive descriptions of the setting, the actions, expressions, and psychology following each sentence, and the different angles of expression all warmed my heart. It reminds me of squatting in the corner of the library reading *Jane Eyre*...

Pat on the head!

Due to the loss of all saved drafts, there will likely be no update today. However, if I adjust my mindset, there will still be one update. There probably won't be any extra updates for a while; updates will remain at one 2000-word update per day. I am extremely sorry for the consequences of my foolish mistake (இдஇ; )o(╥╥)o

My computer suddenly broke down QVQ, so I won't be able to update for the next few days. I'm very sorry. I'll update again once my computer is fixed qwq

After the pig's feet shrunk, its IQ also decreased. Telling his sister about the gender change isn't a big deal, and telling a girl he's only known for a short time but has a crush on him can be explained away with some excuse. But telling someone he's never even met online is just plain stupid, especially since he deliberately revealed his appearance. Doesn't he know that you can't judge a book by its cover? Doesn't he know the internet is unreliable and netizens can be malicious? Doesn't he understand the horror of doxxing? If this happened to a normal person, wouldn't they try to hide it? Only someone with a screw loose would tell others. If it were me and someone other than my family found out, I might even get...

Author, I was among the first to read your book. It's not that we don't like reading your books, it's just that they're too short; we finish them in no time and it's not enough. So we all started "stockpiling" your books, waiting for you to write more before we started reading them. It's not that we don't want to read them.

Firstly, the author's choice of subject matter is fairly mainstream, but not too outrageous. The fight scenes weren't particularly well-written, while the romance and cute moments were decent. The author should improve their fight scenes. The plot isn't too far off track, and the character development isn't overly exaggerated. Hopefully, the author will continue to work hard! ╭(╯ε╰)╮ Also, it feels like the author hasn't quite grasped the core message; the plot is somewhat scattered. I suggest creating a better outline.

"The reason I came back to read this book six times because the neighboring 'Ghost Princess' was updating so slowly"

I want to see Xiaoyueyue go to school.