I Slept for Five Thousand Years

The timeline is messed up, the logic is messed up, and the hierarchy is messed up. Let's leave the timeline messed up for now; I'm sure everyone can see that. Let's focus on the logic. First, the Great Wilderness demons were touted as incredibly powerful, and the people there knew how terrifying the Great Wilderness was, then the male lead easily defeated them. Okay, that's somewhat plausible, but after that, it's unbearable. They keep comparing minor characters to the protagonist, using the perspective of ordinary people. What's going on? Don't those people have any intelligence? It's easy to see who's stronger! Another huge flaw is that it was said earlier that the Celestial Emperor only had an 8,000-year lifespan, right? The male lead slept for 5,000 years, and the female lead gave him a lifespan that even the Celestial Emperor...

Please, please add a harem note! I've subscribed to dozens of chapters and you're still calling it pure romance? I must be an idiot! I only found out later. It's so frustrating.

The first volume started off well, seeming pretty awesome. Then it said the demon was at the peak of the Mahayana stage, oh, and there was a True Immortal above him. Then it said the Immortal Emperor could defeat him in one move, then it said he was just a mount, and kept emphasizing the protagonist's invincibility across the Three Realms. Okay, I thought it was clearly explained that he was invincible. Then, later on, he fights the demon emperor's mount, the demon, who is spitting blood from the oppressive aura, and dies with his own life in a single, all-out attack? Huh? What kind of plot is this? It feels like all that writing was just to kill off the fox sister. The Demon Emperor, for the sake of being invincible across the Three Realms, fights to the death with his mount—is he out of his mind? He wasn't invincible before, and you kept...

First, the author's writing style truly resembles a literary work, rather than just a novel. Then, some suggestions and reflections: 1. The author dug a 5000-year plot hole for themselves, and so far, I feel they've only filled in 2000 years—1000 years for Bai Zhinu and 1000 years for Jiutian Xuannv (if I remember correctly). The plot holes remain unfilled, leaving a sense of something missing and a lack of depth. 2. I wonder if the author is busy preparing a new book? Why end it so quickly? Anyway, I'm used to it. When preparing two books simultaneously, it's easy to make the previous book confusing (I noticed that)! 3. I also have...

The premise is good; the foreshadowing of the younger sister and childhood sweetheart in the beginning effectively builds suspense. However, in the main text... This isn't a teacher grading an essay, but the sentences are overly ornate, which is annoying and lacks pacing. While emotional climaxes are fine, the entire text being overly sentimental is unbearable. It feels hollow. If a supporting character isn't going to end up with the protagonist, don't overemphasize their romantic relationship. A simple act of repaying a life-saving debt is acceptable, but don't introduce lines like "I'm engaged." Either remove the engagement, or just present it as a life-saving act. The problem is, they haven't known each other for very long, and he only saved her life. The premise is really good, and I was initially very interested in continuing, but then... The writing style is... Questionable.

When are you coming back, you trash author?

I knew this book was something special. I followed it from the beginning until it was finished, then I stopped reading because I got hooked on Super Soldier. Now that it's a hit, I'm so excited! I'm genuinely happy for the author. Before, the author always complained about why no one could understand the first volume, why everyone thought it was too wordy, and so on. But now there's no need to worry, because it's a hit! By the way, author, are you still updating the book that sells "Hanging Book"? I'll save this book for later; I'll finish it all after August 7th. Awesome!

Most readers probably felt similarly while reading this book – it was chaotic. So let's break it down first, and then analyze it. First, the setting: in chronological order, it begins with the divine kingdom ten thousand years ago, which establishes the characters' backgrounds and their special abilities. Next is 2019, which introduces the characters and sets their relationships. Then comes a five-thousand-year slumber. The first three thousand years are uneventful, with the characters waking up twice, each time only to gain a new ability. The third awakening isn't detailed, but it seems to lay the groundwork for the September storyline, focusing on September's emotions and the remains. The fourth awakening is a major event; to be precise, most of the plot revolves around...

Well done, hotpot!

I initially thought it was a good book, but after buying it from chapter 57 to 88, all I can say is... I'm an idiot! Bye!