The Herrscher of the Void's Wanderings

Having read the plot so far, I'll give a book review. What can I say about this work? Hehehe… I'm really helpless. First of all… ahhh, I'm too lazy to write anymore, in one word, it's toxic. Many readers have already pointed out the flaws, so I'll just offer suggestions for the author. Focusing on the first chapter, firstly, the mission announcement, that is, the setting and background, are bad. It's not about the character design, it's just that the story's goal is too unappealing. Helping Shido conquer his harem of girls? Are you kidding me? Shido is a supporting character in this work, okay? (✪▽✪) Having the protagonist (a woman) help a supporting character (a man) conquer his harem, and you're not even going to write about them getting married…

It's over just like that? This was the first light novel I ever followed on Pineapple Bun!

When I returned to the dorm that day, I saw my roommate on the top bunk lying on the floor, his eyes rolled back, foaming at the mouth, yelling, "Hey! Good! I've got it!" He had a bucket of instant noodles on his right foot. The rest of us were panicked. I glanced at him and saw his shattered phone to his right, its surface gleaming. Remembering I was a medical student, I asked them, "How long has it been?" They said about half an hour. I calmly said, "There's hope. Did he go anywhere this morning?" They said no, he'd just inexplicably borrowed 5,000 yuan saying he needed it urgently, and then while everyone was sleeping, he was playing on his phone and that's how he ended up like this. I clicked...

The more I watch, the angrier I get. The Queen isn't that weak, not even my final Queen, let alone the story Queen.

The pineapple bun has many books on it, but unfortunately I can't understand them.

How strange. I saw Otto say this in the table of contents and it felt really odd. Even if you called him a cuckold, he wouldn't listen to you. Otto in Honkai Impact 2 and Honkai Impact 3 both sacrificed everything for Kallen. If calling someone a cuckold could revive Kallen, Otto would beg you to do it.

First, let's talk about Date A Live itself. It's a harem novel with many girls and plenty of opportunities for showing off, seemingly perfect for a crossover anime. However, that's not the case. Date A Live's plot is very tight, its setting is well-developed, and its characters are detailed, leaving little room for the author to insert additional storylines (without major alterations). Secondly, the male protagonist has too many unique traits: he's the lover and son of the Primal Spirit, the brother of the Flame Spirit, and he even had a relationship with Origami five years ago... There are all sorts of such traits. To build a harem in a crossover Date A Live adaptation, you'd have to remove or transfer Shido's uniqueness one by one. Otherwise, even if you manage to win over other Spirits, you still won't be able to win over Kotori...

The storyline of the fifth battle was truly idiotic. With so many Herrscher Cores and Divine Keys, they could have easily eliminated the enemy from the very beginning, but instead, they stupidly used small ice spikes to attack people, resulting in the enemy successfully escaping. Moreover, the only person who was seriously injured by the Queen's attack was someone who had been slashed by X earlier, and recovered in just a few hits.

Therefore, Sirin's core being shattered can only be because someone on the opposing side possessed a stronger control over Honkai than Sirin herself. Only one person could possess this power: a Herrscher who controls Honkai attacks. No one else could make a born Herrscher's core manifest on its own. Furthermore, what about Sirin's pride and hatred? The pride of a god-like being combined with deep-seated hatred—that's the Herrscher Sirin of Honkai Impact 3. And what is this? A tool? Finally, a Herrscher's strength depends on their intelligence and ability, but even the weakest Herrscher has a minimum combat strength! Don't assume a weak Herrscher is invincible just because they haven't mastered their abilities! Even a weak Herrscher is still a Herrscher!

First, Herrschers like the Herrscher of the Void and Herrscher of Reason don't have physical Herrscher Cores. Welt Yang's core was formed before Joyce's death, and Ain could only strip Sirin of other cores she couldn't control, not the Herrscher of the Void's core. Second, Sirin, even at birth, already possessed skills similar to Kamui. Her barrier was useless in the Second Honkai Impact 3rd arc because Welt and the others had their own various methods; where would she get the ability to influence the Imaginary Dimension from those ragtag groups? Finally, Sirin's will exert a significant influence. Otherwise, Kiana, who dared to wander alone at the age of 12, would have suppressed her long ago!