After Becoming the Commander of the Girls, I Just Want to Slack Off

To be honest, writing book reviews is incredibly troublesome, but seeing Vivi's stock surge today suddenly made me want to reflect on some things. As a true fan of Girls' Frontline (a fan of the original series), I've been fed a lot of "poison" by the dark and brutal plot of the source material, and I believe many other fans feel the same way. Therefore, I often look for Girls' Frontline fanfiction to read. When SF first launched the Girls' Frontline fanfiction contest, I was super excited and collected quite a few good ones. But how to put it... While other Girls' Frontline fanfiction wasn't bad, it still had that stomach-churning feeling of being read too much. In the end, I unfollowed several books, leaving only a few, among which...

I'm writing this review here and managed to snag a first comment! Since this is my first review of this work, I'll try to be comprehensive, so let's start with the major aspects! *Ahem* [Serious] 1. Main Plot: The story is currently in its early stages. Judging from the current plot, the author seems to be making some radical changes to the original, but it still seems "more or less the same." I wonder what interesting things will happen later? 2. Character Design: Unlike the wives in the minds of many gay men, the author has almost completely "modified" the inner personalities of most of the girls (especially...).

Although the note mentions war, my first impression of the title was that it was a slice-of-life story. But after reading the content, I confirmed it was indeed slice-of-life (lol). Also, this book uses a huge number of references, almost like Gintama. In short, it basically has all the references you'll recognize: Rainbow Six Siege Russian-style rescue; 45 Sister's steel plate (lol, just kidding); references to "Bright Sword"; StarCraft players don't need eyesight… the rest is just filler.

Also, stop with the personal attacks and calling them sycophants. I understand you don't have the brains to understand the seriousness of plagiarism, but you bootlickers who only care about your own masters' safety and don't care about the truth, do you have the right to criticize others? We're making a scene here to make your shrewd editors understand that this matter hasn't been forgotten. Today the original author went to see the editor; let's wait and see.

First, I want to clarify that I've only read up to Chapter Six of this book; I haven't read the paid chapters. This isn't my usual reading app, and I won't be spending money on it. I only came here because I learned about the book from the author on another platform. My main goal is to create a channel for exchange with readers here through this review, to share my thoughts (because the discussion group seems to have been flooded, I dare not speak or ask questions), so please refrain from harsh criticism or sarcastic remarks; this is purely for discussion. Currently, I know there are a few main points of contention...

To put it simply: our authors are utterly exasperated by your authors' "clean conscience." You plagiarized an entire paid chapter and are now acting like the victim. The truth is simple: you plagiarized the whole chapter. We don't think it's serious because plagiarism is the norm here, but what does it mean that you plagiarize across websites now, even if it's acceptable within your own network?

Looking at the comparison images, it's clear that an entire chapter was copied; there's no denying that. Plagiarism is plagiarism. I've noticed a strange viewpoint in the comments section: that the author had a tough time in their senior year of high school. Are you kidding me? What does plagiarizing someone else's work have to do with your senior year of high school? Besides, you're not a kid in your senior year; don't you know the nature of what you did? Being in your senior year of high school is not an excuse for plagiarism.

To be honest, I don't care whether the author plagiarized or not, because I've seen countless plagiarized works, and I've read many books by authors like Shuke and Pineapple Bun. Whether you plagiarized or not is irrelevant, because if you can create your own style, then it's not plagiarism, it's inspiration. But I couldn't continue reading your book after about 30 chapters because it lacked any distinctive features. If your plot and writing style could compare to "This Isn't the Date I Wanted," then regardless of whether you plagiarized or not, I would have continued reading your book.

Haha, everyone knows about your tradition of copying or borrowing from each other. The two platforms' conclusions sound nice, but everyone knows how difficult it is to protect the rights of fan fiction, especially for editors on websites with a strong culture of mutual plagiarism. In the end, all the wrangling and arguments just fizzle out.

If the book is gone, then it's definitely gone →_→ After all, that other book was already finished and is a big-name work, very popular on Shuke. But in cross-platform cases like this, there's an 80% chance it will just fizzle out... Plagiarism is hard to deny, so we'll see how the authorities react.