Honkai Gakuen 2: Attack of the Fat Otaku
崩坏学园2之进击的肥宅
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 612k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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Honestly, I admire many of the great writers' works. Their world-building is complete, their characters are more vivid, and their plots are more substantial, so their success is inevitable. However, with writing, you can only learn, understand, and improve by writing more. I will only work harder in the future. Writing should be interesting for people to read.
There are many areas for improvement.
I have to complain a bit. The protagonist's "couch potato" persona wasn't really well portrayed at first; he was just a couch potato, not fat (lol). Anyway, getting to the point, as a work based on a well-known game's world, familiarity with the game isn't the most important thing. What's truly noteworthy is how well the character's initial awkwardness upon entering the game world, and their subsequent complete integration, are depicted. Firstly, when the protagonist first enters the game (the part about being electrocuted by wires before entering the game isn't detailed enough; it's best not to gloss over it, otherwise it feels like a rambling account), a person from the real world...
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It's getting darker and darker as I write.
Hey there! I think you could adapt this book into a dialogue novel; I'm sure a lot of people would read it.
I remember when I first saw this book, the author contacted me to return the favor. Quite a few people contacted me back then, but it seems only this book has stuck with me. I read some of it before, but haven't finished it yet; I need to find some time to finish all 260,000 words.
I did a test by checking in, and apparently nobody was watching. That explained why the popularity wasn't changing; it was only increasing by five or six people every day. Turns out, I was the one checking previous posts myself.
My writing isn't very good, but I'm doing it with sincerity, so I still hope someone will read it and offer their criticism. That will all become the motivation for me, a nobody, to keep creating.
I broke up with my boyfriend of eight years. I'm a bit confused right now. I'll update you later depending on how things go.
Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! (=ó∀ò)O