
This Demon Lord Could Never Go Straight
本魔王不可能从良
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 688k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 7y ago
- English
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404Chapters
2MClicks
9.9kFavorites
8.9Score
1.4kLikes
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So this is the end? If so, congratulations on successfully disgusting me. It's not because I'm dissatisfied with the ending, but because I've been annoyed since the beginning of the Empress arc. I felt your writing was all over the place and the same old thing. When you said you'd revise the next volume, I kept following it like I was eating shit, hoping to see how you planned to write the next volume. And then you tell me this book is over? Do you even know what after-sales service means? I bought your book and you just abandon it because you're unhappy?
It's actually finished, author! Seriously?
A Few Random Thoughts on the Previous Event
First of all, congratulations on successfully overcoming the mindset hurdle. You should understand the saying, "Uneasy lies the head that wears a crown." Many established writers have encountered this. Just revise the beginning so the other party can't find fault, right? Change the setting, rethink the idea. I think you handled that book quite well; the timid, submissive yet reliable male protagonist still has a market. Honestly, it's a bit of a pity to give it up. Actually, I think this is a good opportunity to recognize your own shortcomings. After all, if that work was really bad, no one would say it was plagiarism! You agree, right? Every established writer has their own suitable writing style and formula...
Everyone's criticizing Shui Jingmingxin? What's going on?
"Mirror Reflection" is utter garbage. He can't even write properly and then bans authors. He truly deserves the title of an idiot, daring to expose his ignorance to everyone.
Yes, I'm just padding the word count.
Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho (´∀`*), stupid (´▽`)ノ♪ I don't care, saka masa 🐴 then, mahou shoho ho ho ho (´∀`*), (≧3≦)oh, van♂, come on, This is the Demon King's ultimate magic, the incantation of Original Sin World's Sorrow. Those who are interested can practice it. There aren't many sf authors who are this diligent, so we should cherish him and squeeze him as much as possible while he's still alive. ●━● Nice
Take more time to look at the characters
The author captivated me from the very first two chapters; the descriptions and plot perfectly fulfilled my fantasies—a truly excellent start. Gradually, as I read chapters five and six, the story began to wane, and the succubus's defining characteristics were completely absent, leading me to initially perceive it as a typical wish-fulfillment story. By chapter eight, the characters' traits had vanished, and the anticipated plot twists failed to materialize. At this point, I felt the characters the author had created were utterly unnecessary (the female leads were merely sluts), perhaps because I hadn't read the later chapters. From these dozen or so chapters...
Wait a minute... Why is everything after that gone...? Please help!
Aww, this book is amazing!
It's a pity that finding a book is easy, but finding a book that can grab your attention is difficult.