Yotsuya Miko, Starting in Douluo
从斗罗开始的四糸乃
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 164k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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85Chapters
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12.4kFavorites
9.6Score
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There are some flaws
As a seasoned reader of transformation novels, having read over a thousand, I've found that many aren't perfect. This is mainly due to a lack of familiarity with the emotions and dialogue, and many authors' failure to grasp the plot and vividly portray the characters, easily weakening the protagonist's presence. This is even more prevalent in fanfiction. If the protagonist is transformed into an anime or similar character, they are easily influenced by the original work's image. For example, Yoshino in this story is influenced by the original in many ways, yet simultaneously connected to her spirit rings, making it feel awkward and even causing several awkward moments throughout the text. The plot is too disjointed and disjointed, with insufficient dialogue and environmental descriptions...
Nine and a half years left, remember to update.
Was the author quarantined?
Happy New Year! Nine more years to go, remember to update!
Dude, I'm already on winter break! Hey, I want to go to your house through the internet and smash your head in!
Please recommend! I've already double-clicked the book, titled "I'd Call You the Strongest in History." In a small county town in the far north of the Yuan Yang Realm, a young man dressed in rags is begging on the street. This young man is named Lin Zhuoyun. Six years ago, he transmigrated to this world, thinking that with a system he could sweep through the other world invincible! But the system only teaches math and physics, and this last task is to beg on the street for three months. When the deadline is up, the system actually ran away! Www
[Do we really need to work harder to improve?]
It's well-written. If you really can't think of anything else to write, you could stay close to the original work and end it quickly (?). Actually, this content is quite interesting, like the Black Rabbit (even I, who haven't read Douluo Continent, am somewhat interested); then ___ that's it. I suggest updating, updating, updating...
Sigh, I'm not going to say anything more... Author, yours is... Too short... Too small... Not enough... Try harder... Keep it up... Damn it [em: sfgirl... I see you're really weak, author!!!]
Did the author get into a car accident and travel through time?
The 29th day of tomb sweeping