It All Began with Getting Dumped

Betrayed by his ex-girlfriend, a poor boy gradually rises to the top through his own efforts, or perhaps due to some unexpected opportunity? The first chapter of this book portrays a cowardly, devoted, and naive protagonist who is willing to sacrifice everything for love. Through his girlfriend's betrayal and the bullying of the powerful, it creates a standard underdog-to-hero story. While the protagonist is insecure, he remains independent and self-reliant, but the pressures of life come from all sides like a tidal wave. If successfully depicted, this could indeed move readers or resonate with many. Unfortunately, the author's writing style is too forceful, making me feel very awkward after reading the first three chapters, and I didn't feel any sympathy...

The actual plot recap will be updated soon.

Hello everyone, I'm the author of Super Salty Fish, 10-Character God... Yes, writing "ten" as an Arabic numeral instantly makes it much more fashionable O(∩_∩)O haha~. This is the first book review I've written in seven years since I first joined SF, and thinking about it makes me feel a challenger's spirit rise from the bottom of my heart ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ. For this book review, I intend to put myself in the shoes of a casual reader who clicked in by chance, discussing my views and opinions from three progressive levels: initial impression, middle feelings, and final evaluation. When my eyes first swept over this book, the cover was very ordinary...

Thank you for your feedback. My first impression of this work is as the title suggests: I genuinely laughed while reading it. Even science-oriented authors have to start from scratch to become novelists! The sense of déjà vu is incredibly strong. Enough with the pleasantries, let's get straight to the point. First, let's talk about the strengths of this work. Firstly, the writing style is very chaotic, but within this chaos, readers can still understand the plot. This is perhaps the advantage of a science-oriented author; like various physics and chemistry formulas, the necessary plot elements are combined in a certain proportion. Even if it seems chaotic, it is indeed truth, and it truly constitutes what a novel is. The overly social...

As a ninth-grader, I wish my senior the best of luck in the college entrance exam and hope he achieves great success. The author was simply fulfilling his own dream of writing a novel, so why all the criticism? Young people naturally have pride, and with the exam approaching, the author might be feeling a bit stressed. Therefore, I think it's best to just offer some suggestions and not take it too seriously. I wish him all the best in becoming a pillar of society and achieving great things. —A crude message from a ninth-grader

I haven't read many angst-filled novels, but this one really appealed to me. The male protagonist's story is relatable enough to resonate with readers to some extent. The author's writing style is decent, and as long as the plot and character relationships are handled well, and the character development is maintained without falling apart, I think it has a good chance of being published. Secondly, I don't think the relationships between characters need to be overly complex, especially in the early stages. Finally, regarding updates, if the author continues updating as usual, there shouldn't be any major problems; everything should be fine as long as the author follows their outline. Good luck, author!

Oh, I'm about to go to the cemetery. It's been so long since the college entrance exam, and I haven't seen you update at all. ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶

I won't go into the other clichés; let me first point out the issues I noticed. Firstly, in the early parts of the novel, Su Yan's feelings for the protagonist felt somewhat unnatural. Why Su Yan liked the protagonist to such an extent seemed insufficiently explained, perhaps because I haven't read many yandere (obsessive/obsessive) novels. Please correct me if I'm wrong. Secondly, the novel states that the promise Leng Muxue made to the protagonist was his "belief," but when Leng Muxue appeared, there was a lack of explanation for why the protagonist was so stubbornly committed to this belief. Although many orphanage scenes were introduced later, it didn't have the same impact as when Leng Muxue was introduced so prominently. Finally...

Author, slow-burn novels require many chapters of setup, and while I think the current chapters you've written are good, assuming it doesn't have a bad ending or get abandoned altogether, when will you ever finish this book? Given your procrastination, this book might end with a series of slow updates like "Grandpa, the novel you're following has updated!" Or "I'm on my deathbed, suddenly sit up, and here's another short and weak update!" So please update soon, author! ∠( ᐛ"∠)_ (Crossdressing is also possible!)

I'll keep urging you unless I'm gone.