The Herrscher of the Fallen World

Why does the world just disappear as I'm writing my story?

A common problem in Honkai Impact fanfiction is that combat power decreases as the battle progresses; they start off incredibly strong, but quickly become utterly weak.

The more I write, the more chaotic it gets; I feel like I just can't express what I'm trying to say.

Who said you lack perseverance? You've been single for decades, haven't you? (Laughs) Ahem, back to the main topic, wishing the author continued success in their work and ever-improving writing. Double praise! PS: Please visit my first SF magazine, ID: SF Monthly Frontline.

Didn't it show as updated? Why does it keep updating every time I log in? Is it not updated, or is it still the same? …,…

To be honest, I was a bit confused while watching it... The beginning of the plot seemed a bit chaotic.

Why has the author only been writing side stories and not the main story these days?

Ah, it's so heartbreaking to see the protagonist without his previous memories. I hope he can reunite with Shido and the others soon.

The biggest flaw in this story is probably the part about eating Honkai Beast flesh. The contrast is too stark, and it's not the kind of contrast that's endearing. Mentioning it once is acceptable, but after a while, it just becomes nauseating and I stopped reading. That's what really turned me off.

The protagonist just died once and was resurrected. Then someone offers to take half your life and you give it to them without hesitation? Are you sure this is a decision a person who has died would make?