As the strongest person in the post-apocalyptic world, I clearly want nothing more than to live an ordinary life. So why does nothing ever go my way? Every enemy is trash before me. If anyone dares disturb the peaceful life I share with my family, I'll make sure they learn exactly why flowers are so red. I'll go with the flow in my ordinary life, seeking neither fame nor fortune, only protecting what matters.
The first volume is just the introduction, so it might not be all that exciting. The good stuff starts in the second volume.
The daily life of the strongest person in the post-apocalyptic world and his family.
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The author needs to put in more effort, and pay attention to the aspects of that effort.
Honestly, this book is most likely the author's debut work, because it contains many minor errors and discouraging content. Generally, someone who has tried writing wouldn't make so many of these mistakes. First of all, I want to say that the beginning of this novel is extremely off-putting. It's not that the premise is clichéd, but rather that the writing feels like the author didn't put in any real effort. For example, in the first chapter, after reading the newspaper report, Han Bingxue initially complains in a normal tone of indignation, which is fine. But then, "after cursing, she slowly said..."??? Author, are you kidding me? Perhaps the author didn't know how to describe a character's speech...
After reading for 5 minutes, I realized the author's writing style needs improvement.
First, presenting a large amount of background information at the beginning feels awkward. Whether it's power levels or world-building, these are best presented within the novel itself; taking them out of a single chapter makes them feel disjointed. Second, the author makes several grammatical errors and uses inappropriate vocabulary. For example, "the only three women." What kind of grammar is that? Doesn't it feel awkward to read? Furthermore, the author uses vague terms to gloss over areas of uncertainty, which feels very perfunctory. For instance, "various countries launched their most powerful missiles." This "most powerful" is something the author imposes on us; the world-building at this point is on Earth, specifically in 2018...
Personal opinion
Hmm, honestly, the first volume was really bad, probably because it was the author's first work, and there were many instances of using song lyrics to pad the word count. However, judging from the second volume, the author's writing style improved a lot, the character descriptions were no longer stiff, and there was no more use of song lyrics to pad the word count; the plot also became much better. So overall, if you can get through the first volume, it will be much better; there's no need to rush to give up. Sometimes perseverance is better. Thank you for watching! (*°∀°)=3
This book is probably the author's debut work.
Personally, I think this book is too wordy and illogical. It's a romance novel disguised as a transformation story, and it might be the author's first time writing. The character portrayals feel too stiff. They might as well change the cross-dressing character at the beginning to a man. Isn't the point of reading a transformation novel to watch the protagonist being forced to transform step by step while feeling helpless? (ಥ_ಥ) Of course, this is just my opinion. If you don't want to read it, you don't have to. Please don't criticize me. Goodbye. Why does it have to be 140 characters? It's so annoying!
Needs improvement
First-time writing often lacks detailed descriptions, both of actions and psychology. The plot development in this story is rather mechanical, resembling a subject-verb structure like an essay with phrases like "So-and-so did this, and then...", Which is detrimental to character development. The male protagonist's personality is rather unremarkable after several chapters, easily leading readers to think, "I'm pretty much like that too," which isn't a selling point for readers seeking a lighthearted, enjoyable read—it's a flaw. Those who read lighthearted, enjoyable stories are seeking something unattainable in real life, something desirable and beautiful. The protagonist's unique characteristics must be revealed through detailed descriptions...
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Personally, I think this book is too wordy and illogical. It's a romance novel disguised as a transformation story, and it might be the author's first time writing. The character portrayals feel too stiff. They might as well change the cross-dressing character at the beginning to a man. Isn't the point of reading a transformation novel to watch the protagonist being forced to transform step by step while feeling helpless? (ಥ_ಥ) Of course, this is just my opinion. If you don't want to read it, you don't have to. Please don't criticize me. Goodbye. Why does it have to be 140 characters? It's so annoying!
Is this a lesbian relationship or a marriage proposal?
The missing chapters are being repaired!
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Is the author still writing?