My Problematic Girlfriend Fell for Me

I gave up on this plot immediately. Is it now standard for villains to start chasing women these days? This guy just doesn't have "villain" written all over his face. Can't we get a little more creative? As long as the protagonist isn't around, the villain obediently sends flowers and pursues the woman, taking meticulous care of her—he's practically a prince in any other story. But the moment the protagonist appears, the villain transforms into a pervert. I feel like the protagonist is the one who forces them to rebel.

Honestly, this is a good book, undeniably. The author's writing is excellent, and the plot is well-structured. However, the romance is just too ridiculous. Following the plot's development, it's definitely going to be a harem novel. Can they handle having so many harems? I got hooked because I really liked Bai Shiyun's character. The main plot seemed clear in the beginning, but did it stray further and further off course later? Every time a girl appears, my mind immediately goes, "Hmm, harem +1." The only major flaw of this book is the excessive amount of harem; it's really painful to read. Aside from Bai Shiyun, Lin Quan, and Yan, the other female characters seem normal, right? Maybe this is an unavoidable element in harem novels...

Don't even mention that this is a 2018 story; even if it were from 2008, I still wouldn't be able to finish it. The plot is stiff, the logic is chaotic, it's all simplistic writing, and the writing is terrible.

I'm promoting my own completed novel, a million-word harem novel titled "Forced by Life," which you can see by clicking on my profile picture. It's a complete harem story with a happy ending, though there are some sad parts. It's all about violence and the female lead will fight back. Sorry if this bothers you.

This book is suitable for beginners. Honestly, I really couldn't stand reading it because of the forced attempts to make me intellectually challenged.

Do any of you guys have any yandere novels with a really deep level of yandere tendencies?

I couldn't stand it anymore, the beginning was so bad, it was practically an abbreviation for "King of Soldiers".

The ending wasn't bad; I think it was pretty good. He married seven wives.

This name reminds me of Chu Nan, the troublesome younger sister who fell in love with me.

Dear readers, please be patient. Ye Zi is also feeling down, so let him isolate himself for a few days and use the time to work on his new book. Please be patient; I promise I won't delay it.