The Hidden Boss Forced to Look After a Girl

Half-asleep, I opened SF (not a delivery service) and saw this book in the recommendations section (oh, another book-starved reader!), So I clicked on it. At the beginning, I even felt like laughing a little (what's with the wriggling mud?), But as I read deeper, I couldn't fall asleep. The world setting is quite cliché: rebirth followed by immediate disappearance upon death, no resurrection spells, skill points and skill trees, etc., All hinting that this is a test version of a test RPG-like isekai (otherworld) game. As the plot unfolds, the author doesn't seem to want to simply reinvent the wheel with an invincible character...

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Author nmsl, it's been two years 👴 I can't wait any longer.

It stopped for two years.

I've been reading this novel for a long time, starting over half a year ago. Back then, I didn't have an account and couldn't follow it. I recently came back. Initially, I just thought it looked good and casually read it, but after reading a few dozen chapters, I decided to write it down. I've been downloading the private server for over half a year now, and I've spent tens of dollars on it all. I'm currently short on money, but I'll continue reading when I have it. Besides, I don't think I'd lose money if I used that money to buy more novels with in-game currency. I'll keep this book, even if you finish it, I won't delete it. ↖(^ω^)↗ Keep it up! *^_^*

I've been using this app since then, and this is the novel I've kept. The plots are rich, yet not heart-wrenching, allowing me to experience the beauty of humanity through enjoyment. I love every character, from the maternal male protagonist to the doting fatherly merchant Glenn, the arrogant saintess Soren, and the adorable antics of the two little girls—all are relatable and endearing. It feels like an imaginary adventure, surrounded by interesting people. Finally, while reading a novel is enjoyable, writing one is just as enjoyable, and this one felt just as satisfying to write.

To be honest, normally, someone like me, both salty and poor, would usually just delete a book as soon as it's published, or keep it as a memento. But I still wanted to leave a comment ớ ₃ờ This book is great, and the ideas are very novel (just being polite ớ ₃ờ, but it's true). The beginning is cheerful and carefree, full of fun and mischief. But later on, it starts to reveal what you really want! Although I don't like healing or conspiracy stories, when you're out in the world, you can't be without emotion, so infusing it with feelings is responsible! It deserves encouragement, and I hope it gets better and better, and that you don't forget your original intentions ớ...

I read the whole thing in one go and can wait for it to grow. The writing feels a bit rushed and strangely feels like filler, ahem. I'm here to mention some obvious parts that made me want to reread earlier and say "uh-huh?" The protagonist's strength grows slowly, he's a potential powerhouse, but his subordinates' growth is off the charts. Why does this plot feel so familiar? I suggest changing the description of rare, overpowered weapons from the last century. First of all, the convenience brought by level 20 and the author's main characteristic of making money to support his children really deviate from the theme. Also, your NPC says that S-rank weapon materials are hard to obtain, and then...

I think the biggest highlights are the plot and character development. Regarding the plot, I felt the trial of Hua Ning and Sauron with the Elf King was handled very well. It wasn't deliberately given a lot of space, and the author himself stated that the focus was on the story. If too much space had been devoted to the trial, the content might have been more exciting, but it would have felt like the plot was being dragged out unnecessarily, giving some readers a bad experience—the feeling that they were there for the story, not for monster battles. Secondly, there's the setting of the story: conquering the plot. Conquering the plot relies far more on strategy than strength, which I think is very...

It's been three years. I'll wait another two. I won't persist any longer. Now all I can do is wait. I don't know where the author is, but I know this book is worth waiting for for another two years, but only the last two. That's it. I've never written a long review before; this is the only book I've written three long reviews for. But my hopes have been met with disappointment. If he doesn't come back, I'll delete these three days' comments in two years. If everyone is still here, you can come and check in. If he comes back within two years, I'll keep this comment. If not, then let's all go our separate ways. Goodbye, everyone. May we all be well.