The Grandmaster Is Not to Be Trifled With

Well, after reading 30 chapters, here are some personal thoughts. Leaving aside the character design, the protagonist is supposed to be able to defeat Laozi (the Supreme Lord Lao), yet he gets slightly grazed by a mere soldier. If he can defeat Laozi, why does he still need to eat? How can a cultivator with thousands of years of cultivation possibly go hungry? How does he overcome his tribulation? How does he avoid the Five Signs of Decay of Heaven? The power structure is completely sloppy; it feels like the author never wrote an outline. The first impression is that it's like seeing so many invincible protagonists on SF (a Chinese online forum) writing their own version. Leaving aside the limited vocabulary, the structure alone is sloppy and overly loose. Short...

Although the writing is excellent and the battles are absolutely spectacular, author, did you misjudge the scale and let the plot soar? Five chapters were spent concluding a quick and decisive battle. And there were even people cheering for the protagonist? Were those hundreds of thousands of monsters just spectators? And how can you make a train ride with such speed and distance? Also, those hundreds of thousands of monsters have varying strengths; some are strong, some are weak. Couldn't even the strong monsters keep up? Such an invincible protagonist still needed five chapters to finish the battle? This plot twist is just too illogical! I personally really don't want to be in the comments section. After all, this is your book. And...

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This book is a must-read for readers who enjoy stories of characters showing off and getting their faces slapped in the face. Overall, it's quite good, but I do have some complaints about the male lead. He's just too dense! When will he finally accept Jin Ling as his Daoist partner?! And will he eventually take on all the harem members? I hope the author will give me a straight answer. Also, this damn long review has to be over 140 characters! Isn't this forcing me to pad my word count? (Laughs) Seriously, isn't it already over 140 characters?

If I had to nitpick, the academy arc was excellent, very well written. However, the later sections on the immortal realm felt a bit off-track. I found them completely unengaging, almost like skipping chapters, and you'd find that even skipping dozens of chapters didn't change the plot much. The plot felt like it was constantly changing direction, completely ignoring Earth's events. There was no sense of space, and the overall atmosphere was lacking. The complete absence of a timeline was what baffled me most. I wonder if it's because authors on SF (Science Fiction) are generally quite young, but almost half the books I've read on SF have this disjointed feel. There's no overall concept or main storyline. It's easy to get sidetracked...

This is my first long review, and I gave it a 7 out of 10. I personally think that rating is fair. However, looking at it now, while the writing style in the mortal realm wasn't quite up to par, the plot was very engaging. After entering the immortal realm, you can see the author's improved writing skills and the setting was elevated to a higher level. Crucially, after reading many of Pineapple Bun's other novels, I found that this author's work is already excellent; giving it only 7 points would be unfair. So I'm coming back to add this review.

Why can't I find the author (My Genius Senior Sister is My Nemesis from a Past Life)?

As a harem/cultivation drama, it's not bad. However, in the latest chapter's final quote, the author said they wanted to write more slice-of-life scenes rather than fighting. But the plot has veered towards fighting, which only shows that the author hasn't yet controlled the plot's direction. Here are my brief thoughts: 1. Jin Ling's personality is too ferocious. It could be used to adjust her personality in slice-of-life scenes... No. I'll write about it. If Jin Ling's brutality escalates later and causes the plot to spiral out of control, that would be bad. 2. Dao Wuchang took Jin Ling and ran off to the Immortal Realm, abandoning Earth. Wouldn't the Heavenly Cult on Earth be thrown into chaos? It's hard to imagine a bunch of monkeys ruling the world without causing widespread destruction. ...

I'm on volume four now. The first few volumes were just okay; the protagonist getting knocked away by minions isn't anything to complain about—even my Prey DPS character gets knocked away by a minotaur in Loran! But that disciplinary committee member in the academy arc really disgusted me. It's clear the author intended to add her to the protagonist's harem, but... As a character destined for the harem, she hasn't shown any endearing qualities, and her words and actions are contradictory. When the protagonist first saved her from dodgeball, she berated him for violating discipline. He saved you, and even after beating you, it's inexplicable that she just disappears. And Yoko's romantic subplot is still the same old thing. And...