I Somehow Became the Heroine of My Own Novel in the Apocalypse

In the early stages of the apocalypse, in a neighborhood in London, the capital of a country called Britain. "My God, a Tier 2 zombie! Its supernatural energy is three times that of a normal zombie!" Exclaimed a stunningly beautiful blonde woman wielding a dagger. "Eating it will almost allow me to advance to Tier 3. In this early apocalypse, I'm probably unbeatable at Tier 3." The beautiful woman acted swiftly, approaching the zombie and slashing its neck; the zombie's head fell off. Then, she cut off its penis and began to eat it. "Hmm, you can eat it without the head and penis; it tastes like chicken, crunchy!" This woman was destined to stand at the top of the food chain. ...

First, let's talk about the less-than-ideal aspects—the plot's coherence. Sometimes the story just feels disjointed, like the chapter where the Undying goes berserk and kills others; it's unclear whether it's a flashback or a current event. I won't elaborate further. The author admits they're not good at writing action sequences, but they're certainly better than I am. My rating isn't entirely fair, but it's definitely my personal opinion; calling it a "universally acclaimed masterpiece" is unrealistic. The plot is fresh, the ideas are good, and it's a work I think is excellent. It gives me better insights and reflections on the world, humanity, and society. I won't inject my own opinions here.

While I was experiencing a reading slump, this book appeared out of nowhere. It wasn't the best one, but it was the one that intrigued me the most. After reading the first 20 chapters, I was deeply captivated by this imaginative and original work. The combination of apocalypse and superpowers made me eagerly anticipate what would happen next, which kept me daydreaming all day. So, driven by curiosity, I continued reading. At first, it was just a little confusing, but it got increasingly chaotic later on, like unraveling a tangled mess. The dialogues between characters sometimes felt abrupt, and I often couldn't tell who was who. The inner monologues weren't very detailed, which is understandable, but I really couldn't stand the sudden flashbacks...

The beginning was well-written, but it became rushed later on, neglecting details and being written too quickly. For example, in the police station scene, many events were skipped without any explanation, such as the reactions of the police, teammates, and enemies. When the protagonist performed exceptionally well, many characters' reactions were omitted. Seeing the reactions of others would have made the story more interesting. Also, the inserted chapters are strange; I hope you'll add side stories (1, 2, 3, 4, etc.), Otherwise it's cumbersome to read.

... The cover has changed.

I don't know why, but after reading *The End of the World*, none of the other post-apocalyptic novels seem interesting anymore.

The storyline of this book is undoubtedly captivating, especially due to its unconventional and imaginative elements. However, the execution is somewhat unstructured and lacks vividness. The most significant reason for this is the book's hybrid plot progression. I believe the author could adopt a phased, small-scale development approach. Since most online novels are written and updated in installments, large-scale revisions are difficult. This method helps limit the plot and maintain control. Author, don't rush; persistence will eventually lead to success. Finally, to borrow a phrase from the text, don't try too many things at once, or it will only damage...

In the apocalypse, anything can be combined, except for invincibility.

When will there be updates? I'm a new fan! When will the main character appear? Will it end with a yuri (lesbian) relationship or her getting married? Ideally, it would be a yuri relationship with a deep marriage, but a solo relationship is fine too. Please don't mess with my mood.

The main character becomes increasingly saintly as the story progresses; it's really unpleasant to watch.