Would You Dare Eat the Immortal King's Apple?

For a seasoned lolicon, this is definitely a masterpiece. The author's writing is free and easy, with a strong yuri (lesbian) atmosphere permeating every line. It also incorporates the novel "invincible" trope, without any depressing gloom or masochistic experiences, just plenty of sweet (and romantic) moments. Ahem... In short, it's very high-class. Getting back to the point, this work features delicate character descriptions, a novel writing style, and a peaceful daily life... Nonexistent... As for what that is? Readers are encouraged to go and enjoy it; I'm sure you won't be disappointed.

Review Title: Emoticons are a major highlight of this book, besides... Note: This review is based on the first two volumes. Any text in parentheses within this review is purely for witty commentary (do you believe what I said earlier?). Main Text: I actually stumbled upon this book while browsing through the updates of the signed contract. I started reading with a casual attitude, but after reading about half a volume, I added it to my favorites. If I had to pinpoint what attracted me, it would be the yuri (lesbian) and invincible trope, which really suited my taste, and the incredibly skillful use of emoticons (though the protagonist being a loli... Wow, author, writing yuri is fine, but a loli doing yuri—do you even know...).

The writing is poor, the plot moves too fast, and many readers barely remember the title before the story ends. The emotions feel abrupt, there are many unnecessary scenes, and the attempts at showing off are forced. The cover is attractive, and the "yuri invincible protagonist" trope is almost my favorite combination of tags, but the author has committed a major taboo of the genre. Just look at some good examples of this genre; doing everything yourself makes it less interesting. The protagonist not being a submissive character is practically heretical, even though the concept of "training" doesn't exist—the protagonist is clearly a seductive submissive (though I personally don't dislike it). I hope the author improves. By the way, this kind of story went to VIP so quickly; this generation of readers is terrible. I'll recommend a few books to the author; hopefully, they'll offer some inspiration...

The female lead pretended to be drugged and captured, then fell asleep and woke up to find herself naked and bound in a turtle shell style. I found this quite ridiculous; I guess she was seen and touched completely naked by someone else. What kind of bizarre plot is this?

I was really annoyed by chapters 14 and 27 of Volume 2. In the former, the protagonist's skirt was lifted and his genitals were touched by a woman. In the latter, the protagonist pretended to be captured but was actually bound naked in a turtle shell. He clearly has invincible strength, yet they still write this kind of plot. I'm sorry, I can't accept it. Goodbye.

Give me back my Freya!!!

Short, weak, and very provocative.

How many sets of clothes were torn up?

Hmm, to be honest, this plot is a bit too self-indulgent; I suggest watching it without thinking too much.

I really enjoyed your novel. Thank you for bringing me some of the rare joys I had. 😊