I Am a Ship Girl

70 years later. "Grandpa, the novel you're following has been updated!" Hearing this good news, I excitedly opened my phone and saw it had been updated! It's reached chapter 114513, finally nearing its finale! /Tears of joy. Suddenly, I saw another chapter had been updated, but it wasn't about the novel itself; it said: {Qiushui, I've developed ship girl technology! /Smirk. I'm rich! I'm not updating anymore! I want to spend the rest of my life with real ship girls… Come and fight me if you dare!} [This is my address: Sirens' Sea Area Command Headquarters.] Reading this, I felt my breathing quicken; it was a mixture of anger and sorrow. I knew my face must look…

Well, this novel, being fan fiction, might not be very friendly to those who haven't played the game, but that's not a big deal. Honestly, I wanted to give up after ten chapters. First, I haven't played Kantai Collection and didn't get the appeal; second, I didn't find anything that attracted me. Although the background is Kantai Collection, the setting could have incorporated other elements; it doesn't have to be a complete copy. The plot lacked significant twists and turns, and the protagonist's unclear goals made the novel feel directionless. If there were any issues, they should be more clearly stated so readers could easily notice them, instead of effortlessly avoiding the plot holes. This is just my personal opinion; please forgive any inaccuracies...

Autumn waters, autumn waters! Update soon! Look how long it's been since you last updated! A full year and 10 minutes! Huh? Wait a minute! How long has it been? A whole year! It feels like an eternity! Fine, if you don't want to update, I'll wait another year! Don't panic, everyone. I'll show you how long it takes to wait for an update!

A year later, I came back and suddenly found out how much they were charging!

While browsing online today, I suddenly discovered that one of my readers is also an author! After reading it, I was blown away by the author's skill. It's truly excellent! Looking through the book reviews, I noticed the author frequently supports other authors writing about ship girls—a real leader! Although I didn't quite catch the foreshadowing, the plot is smooth and engaging. As someone who has played Azur Lane, the experience was incredibly enjoyable. Ten stars! Perhaps I'm just ignorant, but currently, this is the second best novel I've ever read.

Revive, my beloved creation!

, Honestly, I was very touched. I can't believe someone would write such a long book review for my novel. In fact, the author had already realized some of the problems raised by the author when he finished writing the prologue; an overly long prologue can indeed easily wear down the reader's patience. The author has tried their best to add humor and interesting moments to the story to keep readers engaged. Although the effect may be mediocre. Perhaps due to limitations in writing style, as the author pointed out, the excessive use of the first-person pronoun "I" is indeed a very obvious problem. The author will go back and polish it further, hoping to make some improvements. ...

I glanced at the first two chapters. I'm writing as I go. I've met Huai Ming Qiu Shui before, so we're basically acquainted—so I won't be too polite. From her writing style, we can see that Huai Ming Qiu Shui is already a mature author. However, in the first chapter, her first-person writing isn't quite as polished. She uses too many sentences like "I did this and that..." It's not that she's made any mistakes, but there's room for improvement. "I" is a strong emphasis, easily drawing the reader's attention away from the plot. I suggest minimizing its use in narration and replacing it with "myself," "we," etc.

The autumn water level dropped all day on April 18th. Please be informed.

This is a novel featuring ship girls as the main characters. The plot is well-conceived, the writing is excellent, and it's a must-read for ship-themed readers, as well as a worthwhile read for general readers. Although there are significant map changes in the early stages, they don't have a major impact. Overall, it deserves full marks. ++Superior writing++ Ship girl protagonists++ A deep and broad world-building++ Good realistic setting++ Reasonable plot++ Numerous plot holes+ Slice-of-life elements, fewer clichés• Slow-paced plot• Transformation-type story, the protagonist identifies as male• Rapid plot transitions• Significant map changes in the early stages-Difficult for non-ship girl readers--While attempting realistic naval warfare, the ship girl element limits some...