An Ordinary Level 9999 Commoner

I've read up to volume three, and I feel like I can finally write a review. The beginning of the book was quite good, especially the part with the big-breasted cute girl, which really got me excited 😏. But it got increasingly padded later on, with forced filler scenes. Like the part where he saves the demon girl—killing innocent people for someone he only met once. With the protagonist's strength, the other person couldn't even see him; he could have easily saved them, yet he insisted on killing them. Then, even though he has a girlfriend, he keeps groping other women and flirting with everyone. And before, he acted like he was going to earn money to support his family, but he spent 200,000 in just a few days, making it impossible to pay rent. The later parts just got worse and worse.

It boasts a 9999-level cap and looks decent at the beginning, and the middle is barely readable. But what is the rest of it? The plot is so clichéd and predictable: beautiful women in danger, rescue, but no real strength, then they're told to leave. The male lead is arrogant, the female lead is stupid, and the male lead is insane. It makes me want to curse. That's what web novels do. It made me want to vomit. This isn't what invincible light novels are supposed to be. Can't light novels be a little more lighthearted? Don't think I'm being harsh, but if I didn't know how hard it is to write novels, I would have cursed you to death.

If this book weren't so good, I wouldn't even give it one star. It's fine if you release it and ask for money, but the problem is you keep saying you're stockpiling chapters, and then what do you do? The chapters you release all at once look okay, but when you click in, each page is over ten percent of the content, and it's gone in no time. Even I, a very slow reader, couldn't finish it in a minute. "Daily updates, short and weak"—many people say this with every chapter. I just want to say, your paragraph breaks are pretty good, huh? A few sentences per page, a few words per line, and then it's over after a few pages. Has the author run out of inspiration? Writing a book is hard, but this is completely padding. Others pad their word count, you're padding the pages...

I can understand the comments above, but you don't need to publish it for sale anymore. Just keep updating weekly, right?! It's not that we're unwilling to spend money; we genuinely enjoy your writing. But we keep waiting and waiting, and the updates just don't come! We're already at the very bottom of the page... If you really can't keep up, at least set up an extra update rule! We can't satisfy our desires! We're so unsatisfied! Emmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

The book started off well; when it was free, each chapter had many words, but after it became paid, the word count became pitifully low. I even turned the font to its maximum to flip through more pages, but I just want to ask, what's the point of having four or five words per line, or... Per line? Why split a few words that could be combined into a paragraph? The comments at the end of each chapter are all saying the author is "Miao," and that the content is short. There were many comments at the beginning, but look how few there are now. If this continues for a while, it'll probably be a flop. It was originally a very good subject matter.

It's okay to read if you're bored. There are no overly virtuous characters or deliberately kept male protagonists as virgins. I think it's just an illogical, invincible story, so why are you all asking for so much? Invincible stories are all about showing off and getting slapped in the face! Beautiful women are indispensable! Okay? Do you want to see an invincible male protagonist who gets abused? I read this novel just to see the showing off, the face-slapping, and the beautiful women. I don't care about any new plot developments.

Why does he love to show off but not want anyone to know? What's the point? It feels contradictory to the male lead's personality! At first, it was honestly boring; it's an invincible protagonist story, so why doesn't he show off? Why? It's not enjoyable to read at all. If I hadn't accidentally bought the whole thing, I probably wouldn't have continued reading. Also, why do I have to be on page 140 to comment on a book?! ...??????????????

The beginning of this book was quite good; the plot and character descriptions were decent, in my opinion. However, the later parts became increasingly nonsensical. The male lead's character, despite being developed over a long period, still felt poorly portrayed. The plot was also fragmented, with huge issues of coherence. The work is purely based on the "invincible protagonist" trope, but it fails to develop any compelling supporting characters or enemies, resulting in the battle scenes relying entirely on showing off. Its strength lies in its relatively light and entertaining writing style. Overall, it's a work with a small audience, but those who enjoy this genre will likely appreciate it.

Sigh, ever since I started using this app, I haven't been able to finish reading many of the novels here. Either they don't update at all, or they're too slow, or they're completely shut down for updates.

However, the release date wasn't very pleasant. I understand you need to have a backlog of chapters before releasing, but just because of that, you only update every few days. I'm sure at least half of those twenty chapters were free, just for a few cents… You just stop updating altogether, and the author doesn't say anything, just one thing: "You know what I mean…" I understand, but I thought it would be one update a day, not one every few days for over ten days. Everything else is good, and I like the plot, but I feel like I can't remember the women's names anymore, and the women in this other world seem so powerful… there aren't many strong men.