I Became a Young Lady's Butler Because I Was Short on Money

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Exam week... Xia Zheng... July's lethargy... Summer vacation doesn't start until the 14th... It might revive on the 15th—A certain struggling author

Light Palace Reviewer: Coriander Content: First, the setting of the conflict is a highlight; second, the plot and writing style are interesting. Suitable for: Those who like slice-of-life stories. Hello everyone, this is Coriander. This week's book review is for "I Picked Up a Loli and Became a Young Lady's Butler Because I Was Short of Money." To be honest, the first thing that came to my mind when I saw this title was an anime I really like, whose name is the same as the meaning the book title is trying to convey: "Hayate the Combat Butler." So this title made me very interested, and naturally, I became interested in this book. However, when I read the prologue, I felt a bit confused...

Keep it up! It's really good, the plot is very engaging! I saw the halo of humanity in the protagonist. I really like this kind of novel with a different style but full of positive energy! It would be even better if some of the childish content were removed ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏ. I hope the author continues to work hard and bring us more exciting and fresh plots. I feel like the male lead's special job next is to train Zhou into an elegant and refined young lady.

As the saying goes, never underestimate a young man's potential. Don't let the book's mere 20,000 words fool you; both its setting and content are exceptional. Written in the first person, the protagonist's life is changed after he takes in a mute little girl. To raise her, he's forced to become the butler of a sadistic heiress. And his sister is also a top-tier beauty (don't get the idea of incest). Light novels featuring heiresses and butlers are relatively rare; the most famous one I've read is *Wandering Butler* (briefly mentioned), though I wouldn't say it's a masterpiece...

You heartless pigeon!

I skipped all the parts about the river to avoid wasting scrolls.

I started following it from chapter 50, and now... (Grave Visit)

I'm going to dig up this grave, come out now!

Author, actually, you don't have to write the flashbacks all together. While writing them together might make the plot easier to understand, it takes you too far from the main storyline. You've already written so much about Jiang Shiyu, and now you're writing such a long flashback; it's a bit hard to distinguish the main points. If possible, you could weave the flashbacks into the main storyline. Of course, this is just a suggestion; author, you can write at your own pace.