God's Prank and My Disaster

First and foremost, the logic of this story is undeniably rigorous, with foreshadowing and plot points readily apparent. The interconnected storyline keeps the reader's information intake consistently high, leading some readers (including myself) to repeatedly analyze the cause-and-effect relationships between chapters. To address this and correct any logical inconsistencies, the author cleverly uses dialogue in recent chapters to clarify the plot's causal relationships. However, regarding the goal of "helping readers understand the plot," I believe the dialogue should not be too lengthy; simplifying it would allow for a more intuitive understanding of the story. Furthermore...

I initially clicked on this because of the "yandere" tag. The story did indeed begin with the mysterious constitution, but... The plot didn't develop further (I felt like I was tricked into clicking by fan service, lol). The characters weren't well-defined, the charm of the yandere wasn't showcased, and then the plot started to feel like a cheesy romance drama. It was obvious that a lot of cute and harem elements were added, repeatedly emphasizing that various women (including young girls) had full affection for the male protagonist. Although several foreshadowing elements were planted, the subsequent plot development was still worth looking forward to. However, later on...

That's five times more clicks than me! I'll crush you!

My goodness, there are two identical copies of this book on SF (private server). I only noticed it when I came to comment. How embarrassing!

I'm a newbie and have only read a few dozen chapters. I want to ask the author, isn't the condition for activating the Cursed Body a matter of being a certain age younger or older than oneself? Why is it that Situ Muyun, who is so young, can trigger the protagonist's Cursed Body?

Author, will the later chapters be charged?

Author, I hope there are no homosexual elements involved.

Let me give it a quick rating. Objectively speaking, I'd give it a 7.5. The entire story is 130,000 words long, with a narrative style heavily influenced by Ryohgo Narita, similar to Baccano! And Draco's Headless, which is quite novel. This approach has more advantages than disadvantages; if used well, it could easily become a classic. However, due to some of the author's own issues, such as insufficient writing skills (which isn't a major problem), inadequate character development, lack of distinct personalities (which is fatal), poor descriptions, and an inconsistent perspective, this narrative style doesn't actually add much to the story. Generally speaking, Ryohgo Narita's style is best suited for short stories under 300,000 words, because longer stories...

Look what I found!

Hmm, did the author return the pineapple bun?