After We Broke Up, I Became a Winner in Life

This author is extremely irresponsible. They probably only finished high school and are too young to understand responsibility. Jiang Nan's *Dragon Raja* took me through middle and high school, and now I'm a junior in college and it's still unfinished. But at least they've never abandoned it. This author has already abandoned one book; I wonder if they plan to do the same with this one. There's such a thing as responsibility; what kind of novel can you write if you lack integrity? May your grocery shopping be incredibly profitable, and may all your teammates in ranked matches go AFK. The novel's content has become quite chaotic since updates resumed; the main plot is unclear and completely doesn't match the title. Extremely high pretentious, but extremely little substance.

I've been reading this book for a long time now, including this hundred-plus days of waiting (laughs). To be honest, I didn't have a very good impression of it at first; it was just something to fill my stomach when I was in a reading slump. But as the plot unfolded, this book took my 100+thousandth time away (embarrassed). To understand where the story was going, I paid for a book on a website for the first time, and then I couldn't stop. Hence, my current 100+ day of perseverance. The author's control over the plot is excellent, and the plot unfolds well. When the story reached its climax, our author SAMA very happily ended it. Yes, that's right, ended it (...

This book has a high level of sophistication, but due to its short length, it couldn't fully develop its potential, leading some readers to feel that many plot holes remain unfilled and many settings haven't been revealed. However, and yes, I must say "however": the author wrote this book while recovering from illness at home, and now that they've recovered and returned to school, it means they need to focus their energy on their studies. We should wish the author success in catching up on their studies and passing their exams, rather than giving it malicious ratings (I saw one reader give it only one star simply because the author stopped updating due to studies). Whether you wait or not is up to you. Besides, if you were in their shoes, think about how much you've invested...

The male lead felt like a supporting character to me. In the first few chapters, he acted as a harem member for each of the female leads, making it seem like every female lead had a harem, and the male lead was just a supporting character to them all. His ex-girlfriend had a male god pursuing her, his teacher had a childhood sweetheart pursuing him, and Lin Ruoxi had her own brother pursuing her—it was completely the opposite of a harem, making him feel like a supporting character. I felt no satisfaction at all, and the updates became slower and slower afterward. I suggest 3 stars. (Learning how to learn...) ...

At first, this book seemed rather ordinary. The beginning was predictable, the plot followed a typical formula, and the direction felt predictable. However, it gradually changed as it progressed. The writing became more refined, the descriptions more vivid, and the character portrayals more lifelike. The protagonist was initially somewhat vague, but later I noticed his sharp fangs and burning golden eyes. The story also slowly began to pick up pace, like peeling back layers of fog to reveal the alluring truth. Incidentally, the later parts of the book really do resemble Dragon Raja—very realistically! Keep up the good work!

Could the author please dedicate a separate chapter to explain the relationship between Throne Night and Whale Fall? From this point onward, the plot becomes utterly chaotic, with inconsistent style and a depressingly slow main storyline that left me completely confused. Even if the main plot changes, there should at least be some explanation or connection. What should have been a climax was abruptly interrupted, even with forced moments of depression, which is practically a major turn-off. Compared to the first volume, it's like night and day. How did the perfectly good school life suddenly change like that? It would be fine if the later parts were better, but the frustration that arises after reading is really frustrating. I hope the later parts will...

First, I understand and sympathize with the author, because I'm also a senior in high school. It's incredibly frustrating to spend an hour and a half on homework for each subject, and then have to go to tutoring on weekends with no rest. I go to bed at 1 or 2 AM every day and get up at 6 AM. I understand the author, but since they're already in their senior year, why continue writing a novel during this time? Or be decisive and take a year off before coming back. Explain things clearly to the readers instead of just collecting monthly votes without releasing any content. Being criticized means someone likes your novel; you should know why you're being criticized.

I won't criticize the word count as padding since the descriptive words are alright. I came here because of the tags "romance" and "campus life," but halfway through it suddenly turned dark and fantastical. Is this how a "life winner" emerges from? What kind of "life winner" is this? Spending over a decade on revenge can be called a "life winner," then what is a "life winner"? Please give the book a title that fits the plot and find suitable tags. The romance is also problematic; the protagonist lacks realism and inexplicably becomes unable to communicate. Even though they clearly understand each other's feelings, they don't reconcile or talk about it, perhaps because they can't psychologically accept it. Later on, it became completely incomprehensible. The chapters with style shifts are too chaotic...

Overall, it gives me the feeling of Jiangnan Laozei writing Dragon Raja, with a very high level of sophistication. However, the difference lies in the fact that you might not be able to fill the plot holes. After so many chapters, some basic settings are still not explained. It's okay to keep the audience in suspense, but it's not acceptable to leave them hanging. I admit that it's difficult for high school seniors to write novels, but what does that have to do with us readers? You chose to write novels during the important period of your senior year of high school. Either you've already given up on studying and want to make writing novels your main profession, then why are you still doing homework? Or you're simply writing for fun because your studies are too heavy. In that case, let's be clear and not waste our feelings and votes.

I came across this as a harem/campus story, but what's with this sudden shift? The title is "Becoming a Winner in Life After a Breakup"? How am I a winner in life now that I've broken up? The whole thing revolves around revenge, completely off-topic. The author, being a student, might be slow to understand, but the central theme is completely off-track. If you can't connect the dots, it's better not to write anything at all; it's a waste of time. The author's flowery language is jarring; someone who prioritizes literary flair won't succeed in a novel or a college entrance exam essay. Writing style and vocabulary are two different things. Pay attention to the coherence and detailed descriptions in a novel, not just empty words. It's bitter and uninteresting; I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.