A Reaper's Journey to Find Love After Reincarnation

None of the characters in the book have their own thoughts, personalities, or backstories. Important details are omitted, and the focus is solely on the main plot, making them like bare trees without branches or leaves. I especially want to criticize the female lead. As one of the main characters, she should have the most screen time, but what do we see? She falls in love with the male lead subconsciously without any emotional development, like a soulless puppet, or perhaps a clown in the author's pen. Her pathetic arrogance, seemingly from the last century, is her biggest flaw. All the inconsistencies can be excused with the lame excuse of love at first sight, but this...

I only read the first part and it was so addictive I couldn't continue. The premise is that the protagonist is a Grim Reaper, okay, he learns all the powers of the gods, then flips a coin to go to the mortal realm, kills the Demon King and everyone who fought him, leaving only the female lead alive. Then he keeps talking about hiding his strength. You can easily kill the Demon King and everyone who fought him, and the female lead sees it all, yet you still have to hide your strength from her? Then you randomly save someone, and that person falls in love? What a load of rubbish! You just take any pretty girl you see? What happened to all that talk about promoting faith? This is seriously addictive.

The author must be a woman, right?! I've read dozens of chapters and found this novel to be a Mary Sue-esque, androgynous, invincible story!!! The author just writes whatever comes to mind, jumping from one thing to another, making it completely incomprehensible to me!!! This haphazard, arbitrary writing style, this abrupt and awkward feeling—what the heck is this?! The only thing keeping me reading is this supposedly novel premise, though it's not really that novel... Ugh, anyway, it's all very stiff and awkward, completely lacking the smooth, enjoyable flow of other novels...

Review Title: The Author's Description and Plot are Extremely Simplified. Note: ( ) indicates criticism, [ ] indicates explanation! Please read this review carefully! Main Text: Hello everyone, today I'm bringing you a review of the book "As a God, I Want a Wife." Although I wrote one this morning, I'm in the right frame of mind today, so I'm writing this one right away. Actually, I've had the urge to write a review of this book for a month now, but I've been putting it off due to laziness. Today, I'll give this novel a proper critique. Yes, that's right, a critique. But unlike those low-quality people in the review section who mindlessly spew insults, I...

As is customary, I'll give it a 10/10, as a tribute to the author, Wuyue. Given that this is the author's first novel, I can only say that this work has a lot of room for improvement. The protagonist is killed by a meteor, encounters the Grim Reaper, and then the story unfolds abruptly. The Grim Reaper hands over his throne to the protagonist, allowing him to embark on a journey of unrestrained arrogance. The premise itself is fairly standard, not particularly groundbreaking. To be honest, I've seen many similar plots; most isekai (otherworld) or reincarnation stories follow this formula. It's not novel, but it's still enjoyable to read. I believe that regardless of the formula, as long as it's enjoyable to read...

First of all, I'm not deliberately nitpicking, but let's discuss the plot. The plot jumps around from the very beginning, starting with the male protagonist meeting Zi Yu. It feels like I missed dozens of chapters emotionally. Secondly, the world-building is incomplete; it's just the male protagonist going wherever he happens to be. The author should have developed the world-building first. Also, becoming a god with only four cultivation stages seems a bit rushed. Okay, now I'll talk about the most important character, the character, the character. Zi Yu is undoubtedly a character that disgusts many people. Is the author trying to write a saintly character? Then please distinguish between a saintly character and a saintly idiot...

While reading the earlier chapters, I often had the illusion that I'd missed dozens of chapters. The male and female leads had no prior connection, so why did she suddenly fall for him? The plot development was too abrupt, with too many gaps, and I couldn't keep up at all. Perhaps you only focused on the book's title, only mentioning "searching," without understanding how to cultivate affection. You need to understand which behaviors are theoretically culpable and which are simply annoying. While this requires discussion based on personality, I feel that Zi Yu's personality in your book is somewhat inconsistent...

First of all, congratulations to Xiaoyue for becoming a future S-rank author with her excellent foundation for being listed as an A-rank author. I'd like to bow down to this flop, Hongjiu _(°ω°｣∠)_ Because I've received quite a bit of praise from Xiaoyue. To be honest, Hongjiu refers to the author of "Want a Wife" as "Yueye" rather than "Existence," the intricacies of which you can ponder for yourselves (manual sarcasm). Yueye must really like her work, otherwise she wouldn't have used her nickname on one of the female protagonists, a certain little loli. "The girl's hands tightly embraced Ye Lingyun's broad neck, her legs wrapped around his body. Her tail coiled like a serpent..."

I'm back, recently.

The romance scenes are minimal. Ye Yue falls for him after he saves her and helps her with something like revenge, and then it escalates to a point where a simple kiss or hug is enough. Characters with this kind of background are usually quite wary, unless she's been manipulating the male lead the whole time. Zi Yu is similar; her personality is fairly straightforward, but her romance jumps around too much. Long Piaoruo is another example; she's saved and taught strength, and then falls for him, with absolutely no romantic development. While I understand that someone appearing and saving you in your most dangerous and critical moment would cause a significant emotional shift, this is all I've read so far. The male lead's personality changes drastically from earlier on; perhaps it's just my personal preference for strong, assertive characters...