Honkai Impact 3rd: I'm the Captain

Actually, I think the protagonist's combat power is a bit too much. He single-handedly takes on countless zombies and Honkai Beasts, but where did he get his combat power and experience from living in a peaceful world? Furthermore, without any auxiliary items or systems, he can spot a ranger zombie aiming at him with terrifying weapon proficiency, and his quick-scoping and headshots are something only a veteran-level character could pull off. Finally, I remember in the hot spring arc, Bronya took considerable damage even fighting a pure zombie group, while the protagonist, facing both Honkai Beasts and zombies at close range, couldn't even touch them and was still killed by a gun butt... Bronya would be furious if she saw this. And finally, one more thing...

It's quite rare to see this kind of Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction on SF (Site Management). While the author's writing isn't exceptional, it's still quite good and steadily improving. We know that a key to a good work is its ability to capture the reader's attention, and the author does this well. We often see the author responding to comments and valuing reader suggestions, which I think is very rare on SF. The biggest problem with this novel is its update schedule, but we also know the author is a boarding student, so they certainly don't have much time to update. As for the work itself, that's the plot...

I share a similar view with reader "Dreamy Apocalypse": The author's character portrayals in Honkai Impact 3rd are very successful and realistic at this stage! However, the Captain's character development is lacking. Currently, the Captain doesn't seem particularly powerful. We teenagers are certainly looking for novelty. This book is very engaging, and for a new book, I believe the most important thing is to attract readers and pique their interest so they keep reading. If readers aren't interested and unfollow the book after a few chapters, no matter how good the writing or how exciting the plot becomes later, it's useless. Therefore, the beginning of a new book...

I feel the author shouldn't have focused solely on depicting the Valkyrie characters from Honkai Impact 3rd, although it must be said the author did a very successful job of portraying them. The protagonist's current behavior is no different from an ordinary person; we don't see any shining qualities, and it even gives the impression that the protagonist is just another generic light novel protagonist. I know the protagonist is still developing, but if the beginning fails to pique the reader's interest, the novel's future is predictable. We want to see something different. After all, people have a strong curiosity about the unknown, and that curiosity will fuel our continued reading...

Two or three updates a week, or even more, yeah!!!

This is the first Honkai Impact 3rd fanfiction I've ever seen. I really don't want to give up. You've been waiting for half a year, please say something if you're going to cancel it so I can clear out my bookshelf.

I said you look familiar. I saw something similar on another novel app. Some of the characters are the same, but the main character is different...

One chapter a year? You're really something.

Is this what two or three updates a week, or even more, means? I love it!

Update, update, update! Author, please update soon!