What Happens If You Have 999,999 Armor and Thorns?

I think the author's psychological descriptions of the characters are very detailed, but the first few chapters are too long and can be off-putting. I suggest cutting the first few chapters and starting from the male protagonist's awakening. The earlier chapters can be summarized in one chapter; I skipped them directly. Many people only read three or four chapters, and if they don't see anything interesting after a few chapters, they leave. So, I suggest shortening it. Also, I suggest making the writing style more mature, a little bit chuunibyou (adolescent delusions of grandeur). You might not see it now, but it will become more cringe-worthy as you read on. Below are my personal opinions. Could you change the male protagonist's name? It feels a bit strange. I suggest making it a bit more gory, because I prefer angst (this is just my opinion...).

I've been browsing SF (a Chinese online literature platform) for years and have no problem with wish-fulfillment novels, but I think even wish-fulfillment novels should pay attention to logic. The biggest flaw of this book is its logic. Perhaps because I've read too many traditional physical books in Hong Kong, some of the inexplicable plot developments are really hard to swallow... First, the first female character says to the protagonist, a monster resembling a slime, "If it's xx, then it's okay"... I have to say, I was truly disgusted. I don't know if it's a problem with sexual fetishes or some hidden reason, but I'm sure the author didn't mention it. Second, after the protagonist wipes out the base, he suddenly exhales a burst of...

The book review above is actually the opposite; I think the opening chapters were very good. They fully illustrated that the protagonist was just a student. His subsequent experiences and helplessness led him to his downfall, and his strong reasons and determination enabled him to become stronger. Simply glossing over it would have made the decision seem inexplicable. It wasn't very good. Wow, this book review requires 140 characters to post, it's really disgusting. I've said everything I wanted to say. Damn it...

I'm a silent fan who usually just lurks online. But after seeing your comments, I felt compelled to speak out. Other readers might feel this book isn't as satisfying as *The Unlimited Method*, that Yale's anti-armor system, while powerful, lacks the intelligence, versatility, and strategic brilliance of Rowling's *The Unlimited Method*, which allows him to control the entire world. But these other readers might forget that these are two different books. Perhaps the mainstream of the invincible protagonist genre is like Rowling's—one person can manipulate the entire world, is good at showing off, and knows how to manipulate people's hearts. Rowling and Yale are people with completely different experiences. Rowling endured much hardship from a young age, which is why he became such a prodigy. But Yale...

He has already ascended to heaven, and I've come to offer incense this year. May he rest in peace.

Seeing that you said you were going to give up on this book, I felt I had to say a few words. This is my first time writing a book review (feel free to criticize, I don't care). I remember your first signature was something like: "Writing, out of interest." I found that very interesting at the time (though I didn't know what was so interesting about it). At that time, I was reading *Wanfa*, and many people commented that it was a "cool" novel, which I think is quite true. Once you start reading *Wanfa*, you have an urge to finish it in one go, even though it's a bit risqué, it's still very good. When you first started this book on your alternate account, it was number one on the new release chart. What does that mean? It means that your book still has a lot of supporters...

I've also followed the author's other books, each a popular work, clearly demonstrating the author's skillful technique. My overall impression of this book was good, but there were still many minor flaws. For example, the "seedling" part: the author mentions that Milia was the first beast-girl to be sedated, and new girls were frequently sent to her as "seedlings." Over time, the protagonist even lost his rationality and truly saw himself as a stud. This continued until Diana appeared, and the stud life continued for a while before the story of rescuing the beast-girls began. At this point, the number of "seedlings" was over two thousand. If we assume one sedation per day, that means over two thousand days had passed, and Milia was still a virgin...

Dear author, when I first started reading your novel, I could feel the presence of justice. By the middle, I sensed humanity. But towards the end, it became utterly inhuman. From Chapter 3, Volume 8 onwards, it's basically time to abandon your novel. It's not that your writing is bad, but you should consider whether readers can accept it while you're writing. After all, this isn't just your own novel; it belongs to everyone. You've seen the recent dismal returns; it's because readers aren't getting what they're looking for. Those who deserved to die are dead, and those who didn't deserve to die are dead too. This is an invincible protagonist novel, not a dark one. The reason invincible protagonists exist is...

Although I haven't read many chapters, every author knows that the beginning is crucial; a good beginning is half the battle, and this isn't just a saying. If you like something, you'll keep reading out of habit, and even if you encounter something you don't like, you won't give up. It's like when an author runs out of inspiration and pads out many chapters, readers might complain a little, but they'll still subscribe. But this book is poisonous from the start. If this is the author's true level, then I really don't understand why it has so many positive reviews and collections. 5/5 for internal monologues! Absolutely no character development! A character inexplicably falls in love at first sight with a monster who doesn't even have a human "shape"—is this a sign the female lead is a psychopath or is the author's logic flawed? Well...

Rabbit, please serialize "Ten Thousand Laws" on other platforms. I really want to see the sequel.