The Strongest Fox Spirit Slayer Could Never Be Exposed

This is Yin Ji, a newbie writer. After finishing the novel, I'm writing a review for the author. First, the pros and cons are clearly polarized. The pros can be summarized as "novel plot, engaging readers, and bold imagination." The cons... Well, let's leave that for now, there are quite a few. 1. Writing style. No need to criticize this too much, everyone knows what's going on. 2. Unclear character settings. It feels like the characters in this book were written somewhat "hastily." Take the protagonist, Zhang Chihan, for example. Based on what the author reveals in the text, Zhang Chihan was artificially transformed into a monster at a young age, fought on the battlefield, and died...

Now, three months have passed, and I've only managed to write 20,000 words.

Why do I see so many books that are either discontinued or completed on the update list...?

Even after a gender swap, my fate remains unchanged. At this point, the author is a bit tired. Overall, I feel this work is a little better than my last one. The last one had 1600 views but no monthly tickets, while this one has monthly tickets before even 100 views. Therefore, I want to update this book as much as possible. Of course, I won't abandon the other book, just update it less frequently. If you like this book, please add it to your favorites, like it, and leave a 10-point comment. Thank you QAQ

First of all, I'm very grateful to the editor for letting me be featured in the new book recommendation (I never dreamed that my writing, which started from scratch, would actually be featured). After being featured, the number of favorites in one day was equivalent to the number of favorites in a month. However, I believe many people (except for die-hard fans) will have the same feeling: they were attracted by the food and drink on the cover and the novel's title, thinking it was a super good novel. Then, after reading the first few chapters, they'll think, "Is this author only in 6th grade?" My Chinese grades aren't very good, and I haven't written any novels before (except for "Destiny," which I abandoned). I'm basically starting from scratch. I suddenly wanted to write a novel because I wanted to practice my writing skills...

You're publishing a book! Handsome Pigeon, I'm so excited!

Oh my god! It's alive!

This is my first book review, so please ignore any mistakes (come at me if you dare!). I just finished reading all the chapters, and overall, the subject matter and the concept are quite good. Having a good subject matter is a great start (if anything is wrong, feel free to hit me over the Wi-Fi). The author did try to come up with a plot, but it's easy for it to run dry. Some parts could have been expanded (for padding, to get more updates). For example, lengthening the plot, adding some fan service, writing about daily life, or exploring the past (I previously wrote about how my parents created artificial monsters, what happened, what happened afterward, and how I controlled the power...).

Archeology

Update this weekend