Online Game: Looking Down on the Universe
网游之睥睨宇宙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 459k Words
- Genre
- Competitive Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Updated
- 15y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
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All-time: Clicks, Favorites, Recommendations.
143Chapters
99.3kClicks
191Favorites
44Recommendations
62Comments
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The Undying Void God came to visit.
The Undying Void God came to visit.
The essay was written in a fluent style and had a clear train of thought...
Your writing is fluent and your thoughts are clear; it is truly a rare gem. I have already added it to my bookshelf. I hope you will continue your efforts and reach new heights. I look forward to your visit with "Inevitable Reincarnation," and ask for your return visit, guidance, praise, and collection.
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Brother! Keep it up!
Overall, the brothers put a lot of effort into arranging the plot, which was very well done. The plot was tight and immersive. The title is quite good, but I suggest you don't write the synopsis like that. The preceding text is narrated directly in the first person, resulting in insufficient character development for the protagonist. The description of the environment is also lacking, with very few instances of environmental description, which diminishes the overall brilliance of the text. The plot in the previous chapters was a bit drawn out, and the descriptions of monster battles were somewhat lacking.
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Even the introduction has typos, what's the point?
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Come on
The story is simple and logical, and although some plot points are a bit cliché, it is still quite appealing, such as the presence of a beautiful team of women. It reflects both the game and reality, and is not one-dimensional. However, the plot development is a bit slow; the characters' personalities are not very distinct; there is a lack of detailed descriptions; and the typical online game tropes are not handled very well, so they are not fully realized overall. Keep up the good work! Keep it up!
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