The Regional Military Governors

His writing surpasses that of Tang Jiasheng and the Third Young Master; his discourse rivals that of the Southern School and surpasses that of the Third Uncle. Bai Lu Wuyai bows to this titan, daring to beg for three votes from across the sea.

A masterpiece!

Leisurely, I've been visiting with "Empty Hut" for a long time. "The Warlords" is truly a masterpiece. I hope that while you are reading this excellent work, you will also take a look at "Empty Hut." If you can collect it, I would be very grateful.

"Eastern War Immortal" hopes to gain your attention.

Yanxi brings her historical legend "The Rise and Fall of the Nanzhao Kingdom" to leave her mark. She hopes that the great masters and readers will come and offer their guidance, collection, vote, etc. She would be very grateful. (From Android client)

The Supreme Beggar King visits: His hair was disheveled, his clothes were tattered, and he tapped the ground lightly with a bamboo cane. The earth is our mat, the sky our blanket, and the autumn wind sweeps the floor. Holding a blue magic staff, standing on a blue lion ape. The sounds of frogs, crickets, and owls lull people to sleep. The wind whistles, the leaves linger, and even the small bridge and flowing water seem listless. The magic wand startled the birds into flight, and the jade maiden's flute music accompanied you to sleep. It flits flowers in the east, breaks willow branches in the west, comes from the south and goes to the north, and the shadow of the owl is naturally present. The cold wind threatens to break even the hero, a lone figure stands, hand in hand, reaching for the sky. Grudges and affections are all part of the path, I laugh aloud to the heavens. "The Supreme Beggar" seeks patronage!

A newcomer, Qiao Qiu, visits: Bringing "The Supreme Beggar's Venerable." Hair disheveled, clothes tattered, a bamboo staff lightly tapping the ground. The earth is his mat, the sky his blanket, the autumn wind sweeps the ground. The croaking of frogs, the chirping of crickets, the hooting of owls, each sound accompanies him to sleep. Holding a green magic staff, treading on a dark lion-like ape. The wind whistles, leaves entwine, even the small bridge and flowing water seem desolate. The magic staff startles the birds into flight, the beauty longs for her lover, sleepless at night. Eastward he stirs flowers, westward he breaks willows, southward and northward he comes and goes, the shadow of the owl is ever-present. The cold wind threatens to break the hero, a lone figure stands on the ground, hand holding up the sky. Grudges and affections are all part of the path, I laugh aloud to the heavens. Standing tall and firm, breaking through all paths, carefree in the immortal realm, carefree in the divine realm… The path to becoming a Venerable, who says it's difficult? "The Supreme Beggar's Venerable" is here to visit, all newcomers come, please be very understanding!

After leaving the sea, I visited with my new work, "The Reunion of the Heavenly and Earthly Fiends"! Visiting this masterpiece was incredibly enlightening! I will always reply to your visits, save your posts, and add you as a friend! A masterpiece indeed! A masterpiece indeed!

Your writing is fluent and your thoughts are clear; it is truly a rare gem. I have already added it to my bookshelf. I hope you will continue your efforts and reach new heights. I look forward to your visit with "Inevitable Reincarnation," and ask for your return visit, guidance, praise, and collection.

The first dozen or so chapters are indeed excellent, and quite humorous. However, the later sections, especially the descriptions of romance, feel jarringly out of place with the book's historical setting, bordering on artificial. Historical novels should avoid using too many modern terms. Reading this part when I was fully immersed in the story almost made me pause, nearly mistaking it for a romantic drama. Personally, I admire the writing style of the author, "The Drunkard." Nevertheless, this is still a very good novel, especially considering it's the author's first work. I hope they continue their efforts.