A Song of Heavenly Slaughter

I've been writing for several years, and this year I switched to professional writing. I feel the novel has several major flaws: extremely poor immersion. After reading for a while, I still don't understand what it's about. The narrative flow is also poor, the setting is chaotic, the plot is mediocre, and it feels like the author is a novice. There needs to be more environmental description and atmosphere to make the world feel more real.

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It's all in English! How amazing! Speaking of bars, I'm a grown man and I've never been one. The author writes very realistically, it's also very bloody and violent, the writing is very engaging, and it has a Western sense of heroism. I hope... Keep up the good work, author! Although I personally don't really like reading the whole thing yet...

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