Qin Conquers the World

The language is quite weak. The plot is disjointed. The characters' inner thoughts are poorly portrayed. The author should keep trying. Study how others write and learn from their strengths.

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That's incredible! The Qin Dynasty actually had swords? And long-handled ones at that! Good heavens! Also, what era is that sniper rifle from? It can shoot two kilometers away; how could anyone survive a 25mm shot to the body? I have to admire that. Unless it hits the hand or foot, why bother hitting the head?! And it didn't even explode after hitting the hand! Damn, a super-alloy head! Couldn't you have done some research before writing this book? You've made so many blunders!

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