The Carefree Divine Thief of the Online Game

"[[Jay Chou's "The Clock in the Opposite Direction" ♞ Ye Tianshi's "Clinical Guide to Medical Cases"]"

The strengths of *The Online Game: Dominator of Gunfights* lie in its coherent plot and detailed descriptions. The psychological portrayals of Li Yao and Ye Xue are particularly well done, as are the characters of Lin Hao's dozen or so brothers and the later additions, Gu Deng Huo and Ming Yu. However, its weakness lies in the lack of explanation regarding the identities and power of the Lin and Nangong families, and the disparity between them and the Ye and Li families. *The Online Game: The Carefree Thief* is better than the previous book, but the plot becomes disjointed after Liu Wenshu's death in the year following the Lunar New Year. If possible, I suggest you write a sequel to *The Online Game: Dominator of Gunfights*, revealing the identities of Lin Hao, Nangong Qingwu, and Nangong Qingmeng, and outlining the subsequent events. Ideally, it should extend to the point where Lin Hao's Hidden Dragon Warrior inheritance is complete and Xinlan has died. If that's not possible, I won't force you.

Congratulations on the completion of the book!

A myriad of perspectives reveal the author's inner voice; every word and phrase reflects their hard work. I recommend their children's work, *Fairy Tale Rice Noodles*, and their energetic light novel, *Miracle Master*. Writing is no easy feat, so let's cheer them on! O(∩_∩)O haha~

Is this book abandoned? @RedTeaIce

Keep it up! Looking forward to it!

Ah, finally, updates are back on track!

→_→ I'm so touched. Finally, another update!

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A new author and author of "DNF: Conquering the World" has come to visit. I have already added the masterpiece to my collection. I wish your great work great success!