Prelude to the Apocalypse

The starlight fades as dawn breaks, a crimson glow floats across a corner of the sky. The dew has dried on the flowers in the small garden, the sun's rays just reaching the window. The lake in August is level, its surface reflecting the vast sky. Mist rises from the Yunmeng Marsh, waves shake Yueyang City. I wish to cross, but have no boat or oars; to remain idle is a disgrace to this enlightened ruler. I sit and watch the anglers, filled only with longing for their catch. 🌷🌸🌼🌷 (Sorry, I don't have any votes for the author on this account. The author only gets off work tonight; please have her send votes, or use Jinxi's account to send votes. Wishing you a happy and productive year of writing! 🌷🌼🌸🌷)

After reading the latest chapter, here are my brief comments. First, I strongly support science fiction, especially bio-genomics, as it aligns with my own ideas. My comments are as follows: 1. The writing is very smooth, clearly demonstrating a solid foundation. The transitions are excellent, and the layout is good, though it still needs refinement. The drawbacks are occasional confusion in perspective and inadequate scene descriptions. 2. The character's strength is evident, but only in terms of physical prowess. The author should explore various aspects of each character's strengths, or perhaps use the highlights of supporting characters to emphasize the protagonist. In harsh survival environments, strong willpower and unwavering belief are crucial. Also, the large number of characters can make it difficult to distinguish between main and supporting roles. 3. The story unfolds naturally and logically, gradually revealing its world-building and vast background, creating anticipation. However, the main plot is somewhat vague (what are they actually trying to do? Are they simply trying to survive? Or are they trying to overthrow something? Or...).

This is the most captivating science fiction book for me, and I'll support it until the end. Once I catch the latest chapter, I'll definitely provide a detailed review.

Prelude to the Small Order, Chapter 18.

I also write both fantasy and science fiction; any pointers would be appreciated.

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