The Fallen Angel Investigation Squad

Yama, the King of Hell, is powerful and prestigious. His famous line is: "Of all living beings, which one is not under my jurisdiction? Whoever I decree to die at midnight will not live past dawn." But this is all just an appearance, an illusion... My heart is aching, I must be strong. Bah! Fate is in my own hands. I'll fight against that damned heaven! Being domineering requires resources; inner strength and external power are not easily acquired. Yama, the King of Hell, must strive for self-improvement. This path of self-improvement is right beneath our feet. One day, my enemies will have to bow down.

Without studying, Zhuge Liang was ultimately just a clever man, far from being a wise man. Think of Zhuge Liang, who farmed in Nanyang. Farming was to strengthen his physique, reading was to enhance his learning, and gazing at the sky was to wait for the best opportunity. A genius who doesn't study will eventually become a fool. Besides, I am an ordinary person with dull talent, and Guo Jing and Xu Zhu are my role models. Guo Jing and Xu Zhu worked hard in every way, but they were ignored by readers, who only talked about chance.

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I immediately noticed a grammatically incorrect sentence: "Zhen Shangfei walked into the classroom in a daze." First of all, "daze" describes the state of a seriously ill patient in a state between consciousness and unconsciousness. If Zhen Shangfei were a bedridden patient who returned to school in a daze while in a confused state, then there would be no problem. However, in the text, she actually walked into the classroom, so this is inappropriate. Therefore, the first sentence should read, "Zhen Shangfei walked into the classroom in a daze."

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Long time no see, fellow Daoist, Happy New Year.